Essay About Insternship

[ineedyou]

Bonjour, je dois écrire une présentation de mon stage en anglais.

Je n'ai pas trouvé beaucoup de synomymes en anglais de certains mots (comme shelf ou brand) : ce qui donne un aspect très répétitif à mon texte (en plus d'un niveau de base avec, je pense, pas mal de fautes..)

Est ce possible de me faire corriger ce (mini) rapport de stage ?

Je vous en remercie énormément d'avance.

(INTRO To find an internship sales consultant, as

part of the school, I decided to present my resume and my cover letter in D**** (a firm)

C******, near R***. At this moment, I had the opportunity to meet the

store manager who immediately welcomed me into his store as a saleswoman for 9

weeks.

(FIRM D**** is a Buisness to Consumer store which

means that this is a company with a direct relationship with customers. This

brand offers appliances and multimedia products, but also a developed service

with telephone subscriptions, internet and TV channels. The D**** in which I

work is placed in C*****, a commercial area. It is only ten

minutes from R**** and includes more than 170 different brands.

(OBJECTIVES During this internship in D****, I sell

the products in small appliances. I have a direct contact with customers who

requested advice about a product or who wished to purchase a specific product

in the brand. This internship is also a way to learn how to fit in a new team. This

is the first time I practice an internship for a period of two months,

particularly with specific objectives.

(WORK When I arrive to D****, I should sell the most

products that I could in my shelf. At the beginning, it was kind of hard

because I didn’t know well the products in my shelf. So my speech was confused

and the client gave me not all his confidence. When I sell a product like a

coffee machine, I should propose others products which get with the product I have

been sold for example the descaler or the guarantee. But being a saleswoman isn’t

only sell products. I also have to rank the products relatives to their prices

or add the news products in my shelf or print new prices of the day. Sometimes

I have to go in another brand which sells the same kind of products. I should

write the prices of a specific product in the brand. Then the chief could compare

the price between this company and his store.

(DIFFICULTY The main difficulty was to get

acquainted with the products in the shelf and how they work, because the

question was often asked by clients. Often I felt that I was in competition

with other saleswomen of my shelf. Some of them did not always accepted that I

can advise a client on well-commissioned product. I regret that commissions I

have collected throughout the duration of my internship were not given to

saleswomen. It would have avoid me a few remarks. But I managed to erase these

differences and nothing prevented me from my good integration within the team.

(CCL At the professional level, this internship had

enabled me to understand the course of a sale to a customer face. Then I could

distinguish the different stages of people in order to achieve a sale. Thanks

to this internship I could have put myself in a situation of a saleswoman and acquire

business experiences as a saleswoman. I discovered at the same time the

operation of a business in a big firm. This internship also aims to bring me a

good experience on a personal level because it is long enough to learn all the

features of the products which I am in contact with and thus learn to assert

myself with clients to gain their trust when I have to give them some advice.

On the other hand, this course should enable me to learn about myself with a

goal of integration into the team.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour, je dois écrire une présentation de mon stage en anglais.

Je n'ai pas trouvé beaucoup de synomymes en anglais de certains mots (comme shelf ou brand) : ce qui donne un aspect très répétitif à mon texte (en plus d'un niveau de base avec, je pense, pas mal de fautes..)

Est ce possible de me faire corriger ce (mini) rapport de stage ?

Je vous en remercie énormément d'avance.

(INTRO To find a sales consultant internship as part of the school course, I decided to present my résumé and my cover letter in D**** (a firm) C******, near R***. At that moment, I had the opportunity to meet the store manager who immediately welcomed me in his store as a saleswoman for 9 weeks. L'emploi du nom composé est bien utile en anglais, tâche d'y penser.

(THE FIRM D**** is a business to Consumer retail store which means that this it is a company which has a direct relationship with customers. This brand store offers sells appliances and multimedia products, but also a developed service with telephone subscriptions, the Internet and TV channels. The D**** store in which I worked is situated / placed in C*****, a shopping centre / commercial area. It is only ten minutes from R**** and includes more than 170 different brands / makes.- À la 1ère ligne, je n'ai pas compris ce que tu as voulu dire. J'ai donc mis retail store = magasin de détail. À toi de voir.

- Attention à toujours employer le prétérit puisque tu fais le récit d'un évènement passé, terminé, daté.

(OBJECTIVES During this internship in D****, I sell sold the products in small appliances. I have had a direct contact with customers who requested advice about a product or who wished to purchase a specific product in the of a particular brand. This internship is was also a way to learn how to fit in a new team. This is It was the first time I practice did an internship for a period of two months, particularly with specific objectives. prétérit encore, voir au dessus

(WORK When I arrived to at D****, I should was to sell the most products that I could in my shelf. At the beginning, it was kind of hard because I didn’t know the products well in my shelf. So my speech was confused and the client gave me not all his didnt't have full confidence in me. When I sell sold a product like a coffee machine, I should have proposed others supplementary products which get with the product I have been sold for example the descaler or the guarantee. But being a saleswoman isn’t doesn't only consist in selling products. I also have had to rank the products relatives according to their prices or add the news products on my shelf or print new prices of the day. Sometimes I have had to go in to another brand store which sells the same kind of products. I should was to write the prices of a specific product in the brand. Then the chief could compare the price between this company and his store.

Tu me donnes parfois l'impression de confondre le sens de a brand = une marque (de produit) avec a store = un magasin Quel type de dictionnaire utilises-tu ?

(DIFFICULTY The main difficulty was to get acquainted with the products in the shelf and how they work because the question was often asked by clients. Often I felt that I was in competition with other saleswomen of my shelf. Some of them did not always accepted that I can could advise a client on a well-commissioned product. I regret that commissions I have collected throughout the duration of my internship were not given to saleswomen. It would have avoid kept me clear of a few unpleasant remarks. But I managed to erase these differences and nothing prevented me from my good integration within the team. auxiliaire + base verbale, toujours et attention à la concordance des temps.

(CONCLUSION <??? At the professional level, this internship had enabled me to understand the course of a sale to a customer face. Then I could distinguish the different stages of people in order to achieve a sale. Thanks to this internship I could have put myself in a situation of a saleswoman real-life situation and acquire business experiences as a saleswoman. I discovered at the same time the operation of a the way / how / business works in a big firm. This internship also aimed to at bringing me a good experience on a personal level because it is was long enough to learn all the features of the products which I am was in contact with and thus learn to assert myself with clients to gain their trust when I have had to give them some advice. On the other hand, this course should enabled me to learn more about myself with a goal of integration into in order to join the team.