Analyze Literary Device

[Naya Ternura]

Bonsoir j'ai un devoir a faire et je bloque sur une question pouvez vous m'aider? j'ai repondu a toutes les autres questions

voila une partie du texte

That was many years ago, twenty years or more, and during this time, Okonkwo’s fame had grown like a bush-fire in the

*harmattan. He was tall and huge, and his bushy eyebrows and wide nose gave him a very severe look. He breathed heavily, and it was said that, when he slept, his wives and children in their out-houses could hear him breathe. When he walked, his heels hardly touched the ground and he seemed to walk on springs, as if he was going to *pounce on somebody. And he did pounce on people quite often. He had a slight *stammer and whenever he was angry and could not get his words out quickly enough, he would use his *fists. He had no patience with unsuccessful men. He had no patience with his father.

et la question est : Find a metaphor in paragraph 3 and explain its effect on the reader.

Pouvez vous m'aider s'il vous plait? Merci d'avance

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Je ne te ferai pas l'injure de te demander si tu sais ce qu'est une métaphore. Personnellement, je n'en vois qu'une dans ce bout de texte : Okonkwo’s fame had grown like a bush-fire in the harmattan.

Quel effet cette métaphore produit-elle sur le lecteur ? Si on réfléchit à la façon dont un feu de brousse attisé par l'harmattan (vent sec du Sahara) peut se propager, je dirais qu'on en retire une impression de puissance qui va crescendo, que rien ne peut arrêter et d'extrême rapidité. On en déduit donc que la renommée d'Okonkwo avait grandi de la même manière.

Qu'en penses-tu ?

[Naya Ternura]

Vraiment merci de ton aide! desolee d'abuser mais j'ai fait une redaction j'aimerai que quelqu'un la corrige. j'ai pas compris le sujet mais j'ai essaye d'ecrire.

Would you say that our society is more tolerant than it used to be some one hundred years ago or would you say that there is still room for improvement. Discuss this taking as example the conditions of women or the poor in our country.

Over the years our society made progress to be more tolerant than in the past. As we can notice the condition of women changed and became more acceptable than one hundred years ago. Women who were considered like a home machine- just to give birth and take care of the home- couldn’t do men work. In addition, they didn’t have words to say that means they couldn’t give their opinion about something. However this condition has changed up to give to women the right to vote, the free expression and even eradicate the idea that women can’t do hard job like become a technician or builder. In the other hand, some people think there is still room for improvement. These argue this with the discrimination against women, the sexism. Some women wanted to be equal to men by being brave and courageous but there is a different in the paid they get. Men earn more than women just because they are men not because they did supplement work which is unfair and has to change. Effectively nothing is perfect and has to be improve at any time.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Vraiment merci de ton aide! desolee d'abuser mais j'ai fait une redaction j'aimerai que quelqu'un la corrige. j'ai pas compris le sujet mais j'ai essaye d'ecrire.

Would you say that our society is more tolerant than it used to be some one hundred years ago or would you say that there is still room for improvement. Discuss this taking as example the conditions of women or the poor in our country.

Over the years our society has made progress to be more tolerant than in the past. As we can notice the condition of women has changed and has become more acceptable than one hundred years ago.<Dans la mesure où un lien est établi entre passé et présent, le present perfect est préférable. Women who were considered like regarded as a home machine- just to give birth and take care of the home- couldn’t do men's work. In addition, they didn’t have words to their say in any topic, which means they couldn’t give their opinion about someanything.<Quand tu utilises le dictionnaire, efforce-toi d'y trouver l'expression idiomatique la mieux adaptée. Là, tu n'en étais pas loin. However this condition has changed up to give to women the right to vote, the free expression and even eradicate the idea that women can’t do hard jobs like become a technician or a builder. On the other hand, some people think there is still room for improvement. These They argue this with the about discrimination against women the and sexism. <Si j'ai bien compris ce que tu as voulu dire. Some women wanted to be equal to men by being brave and courageous but there is still a difference in the pay / wages they get. Men earn more than women just because they are men not because they did supplement additional / extra work, which is unfair and has to change. Effectively nothing is perfect and has to be improved at anytime.

[Naya Ternura]

Merci pour les corrections! J'ai decide de ne plus utiliser de dictionnaire donc c'est une redaction sans aide du dictionnaire.

Pourrais-je avoir des informations supplémentaire concernant le present perfect?

[Jean B]

Merci pour les corrections! J'ai decide de ne plus utiliser de dictionnaire donc c'est une redaction sans aide du dictionnaire.

Pourrais-je avoir des informations supplémentaire concernant le present perfect?