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[abyssale]

Bonjour à Tous!!!!

Voilà, moi et mon execrable niveau d'anglais avons tenté d'écrire un petit texte de présentation pour un devoir.

Quelqu'un aurait il l'amabilité de me dire si j'ai fais des érreurs (ce qui sera certainement le cas!) et de m'aider à les corriger? (ne corrigez pas mes fautes d'orthographes Françaises vous risquez de vous arracher les cheveux!) J'éprouve beaucoup de difficultés sur les temps en fait...(en anglais hein ^^)

My name is "abyssale" and i'm 18 year old. I live in Grenoble for the week, but I come from "...", a little city of "haute-savoie."

I like act, sing, and write. When i was young, I played theatre in a company, and i sang in chorale with the soprano. I loved so much did this, this was passion for me. I also wrote a lot, but my poems were always sad, dark, glaucous and disturbing. I wish i had the orpportunity to go in a music school to learn opéra but it was too expansive for my familly, and moreover this studies don't really offer a job. That's why I choice Psychology. My first idea was to find a job in the psychology and in connection with crime and délinquency. So i wanted to be a clinical psychologist with a spécialisation in criminology, but i understood that it was not exactly what i thought. Criminoly in Psychology, in France, relates in particular to juvenile crime, shoplifting, robbery with violence,... As for me, i'm interested in murderer, pedophile, serial killer,...(je voulais dire que la criminologie française ne traite que rarement de meutriers mais plus de délinquance style vols, braquages,... bref des trucs et des sujets qui ne m'intéresse pas, j'éspère que le sens de ma phrase se comprend...)

And i'am effraid of this juvenile crime could be boring.

So perhaps, afert my "master" i'm going to belgium for a pécialisation in criminology.

Otherwise after my master in clinical psychology, i'm going to try the exams to enter in the army or in the police to be psychologist serving in the army or a Police psychologist. But like i have a lot of health problem, i'am not sure to be accept.

Voili voulou... Qu'en dîtes vous?

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour à Tous!!!!

Voilà, moi et mon execrable niveau d'anglais avons tenté d'écrire un petit texte de présentation pour un devoir.

Quelqu'un aurait il l'amabilité de me dire si j'ai fais des érreurs (ce qui sera certainement le cas!) et de m'aider à les corriger? (ne corrigez pas mes fautes d'orthographes Françaises vous risquez de vous arracher les cheveux!) J'éprouve beaucoup de difficultés sur les temps en fait...(en anglais hein ^^)

My name is "abyssale" and I'm 18 year old. I live in Grenoble for during the week / on weekdays, but I come from "...", a little city of in Haute-Savoie.

- le pronom sujet 1ère personne singulier ne s'écrit qu'en MAJUSCULE.

- of exprime avant tout la possession <---> ici, de exprime le lieu = in

- majuscule également à tous les noms propres

I like acting, singing, and writing. <Au choix, like peut être suivi d'un infinitif complet ou de v-ing. When I was young a kid, I played theatre appeared on the stage / did some acting / in a company and I sang in a choral with the soprano. I loved doing this so much that it was a passion for me. I also wrote a lot, but my poems were always sad, dark, glaucous and disturbing. I wish i had the orpportunity to go register in a music school to learn opera but it was too expensive for my family, moreover this these studies don't really offer lead on to a job. this + singulier <---> these + pluriel That's why I choice chose psychology. choice = nom <---> choose = verbe My first idea was to find a job in the psychology and in connection with crime and délinquency. So i wanted to be a clinical psychologist with a specialization in criminology, but i understood that it was not exactly what i thought. In France, criminoly in psychology particularly relates in particular to juvenile crime, shoplifting, robbery with violence,... As for me, i'm interested in murderers, pedophiles, serial killers,... And i'am effraid afraid of this juvenile crime could be boring.

So perhaps, afert my master's degree i'm going to belgium for a pcialisation to specialize in criminology.

Otherwise after my master in clinical psychology, i'm going to try the sit for exams to enter in enlist in the army or in the police to be a psychologist serving in the army or a police psychologist. But like as / since i have a lot of health problems, i'am not sure to be accepted.

Voili voulou... Qu'en dîtes vous?