Essay

[Naya Ternura]

Bonjour, j'ai un devoir d' expression ecrite et je suis bloquee. La j'ai fait quelque chose mais j'ai pas vraiment parle des eleves et de l'ecole dans le developpement. Est ce acceptable mon travail?

PS: j'ai un clavier anglais donc desolee pour les accents :P

We should not teach history in schools. History should be forgotten if we want to build a world without resentment. Discuss the pros and cons of this issue.

History is the study of the human past as it is described in the written documents left by human beings or in the oral by stories or songs. But the subject of War memorials and war commemorations is painful to the victim’s families which raises the problem of the importance the history in the schools. Should History be forgotten if we want to build a happy world?

History is the foundation of the present and then of the future because of : firstly history determines our origin that means where we’re come from - example Americans know they have slaves background by history- and why we’re here and where we are going. Secondly, the consequence is the study of history provides a window into the past and a chance to review the mistakes- what our ancestors did- and avoid them in the future; some of these mistakes have had extreme and horrible effects.

However, people think History should be forgotten because it makes find the fresh pain in the victim’s families’ heart. It doesn’t heal people who have suffered. Here there is the needed to forget every single sad moment if we want to build a new, objective and happier future. Finally people can’t have their own personality they have always to think in the way to improve their ancestors’ ideas.

Even though history can be hard to bear because of the spleen in which it plunges us; it’s a way to build the world with proudly because victims are now our heroes. History connects children with their parent’s culture so it should be teach in schools.

[Jean B]

Bonjour et bienvenue sur le forum,

We should not teach history in schools. History should be forgotten if we want to build a world without resentment. Discuss the pros and cons of this issue.

History is the study of the human past as it is described in the written or oral documents left by human beings or in the oral by through stories or songs. But the subject of War memorials and war commemorations is painful to the victims’ families, which raises the problem of the importance the of history in the schools. Should History be forgotten if we want to build a happy world? - après la virgule, le relatif which reprend la proposition qui précède. Mais encore faut-il que la virgule soit présente !

- omission de the devant un nom employé dans la généralité. Pose-toi la question : "Quelles écoles " ?

History is the foundation of the present and then of the future because of : firstly history determines our origin that means where we’re come from - example Americans know they have slaves background by history- and why we’re here and where we are going. Secondly the consequence is and consequently, the study of history provides a window into the past and a chance to review the mistakes- what our ancestors did- and avoid them in the future; some of these mistakes have had extreme and horrible effects.

However, people think History should be forgotten because it makes find the fresh revives pain in the victims’ families’ hearts. <Attention aux différentes formes du génitif, particulièrement quand le possesseur est un pluriel en -s. It doesn’t heal people who have suffered. Here there is the needed to forget every single sad moment if we want to build a new, objective and happier future. Finally people can’t have their own personality they have always to think in a way to improve their ancestors’ ideas.

Even though history can be hard to bear because of the spleen in which it plunges us into, it’s a way to build the world with proudly because victims are now our heroes. History connects children with their parents’ culture so it should be teach taught in schools.

[Naya Ternura]

Merci beaucoup pour les corrections .

je l'enverrai ainsi je sais pas trop comment aborder le sujet lui meme

[Naya Ternura]

Sorry for abusing, i'm back. i'm really bab in translation can you please correct me?

Here is the work i did

Complétez les phrases suivantes en mettant les expressions entre parenthèses à la forme appropriée :

1. She remembers (leave) the party and (feel) ashamed at his behaviour.

Leaving ....feeling

2. The father went on and on (accuse) him and (threaten) him.

Accusing....threatening

3. How she loved (ride) through the countryside and (come) across the old villages.

Riding ....coming

4. (Read) and (play) the piano were her favourite pastimes.

Reading....playing

5. She would have liked to (know) her servants more and (play) with their children.

Know...play

Complétez les phrases avec des pronoms réfléchis si nécessaire

1. I caught him looking at ..................in the windowpane.

I caught him looking at myself in the windowpane

2. The children enjoyed ....................... at the beach.

The children enjoyed themselves at the beach.

3. I made all this work ......................... .

I made all this work myself.

4. Every morning he shaved ...........................and dressed ................................ in a hurry.

Every morning he shaved and dressed himself in a hurry

Traduisez les phrases suivantes en anglais

1. Elle ne supportait de voir ses serviteurs si mal traités. (bear)

She didn’t bear to see her servants so badly treated

She couldn’t bear to see her servants so badly treated

2. Elle ne pensait pas que bavarder avec les indigènes était répréhensible.

She didn’t think that talking with natives was reprehensible.

3. Cet empire était fait pour enrichir l’Angleterre. (make England richer)

This empire was to make England richer

4. Cette vie qu’elle menait était comme vivre dans une illusion.

This life she had was like living in an illusion

5. Je me suis retrouvé en pleine forêt et je ne me rappelais plus du chemin.

I found myself in a deep forest and I couldn’t remember the way.

[Jean B]

Sorry for abusing, I'm back. I'm really bad in at translation translating. Can you please correct me?

Here is the work I did. Un clavier QWERTY n'est pas dépourvu de la touche MAJUSCULES. Alors, s'il te plaît, utilise-la.

Pour les accents, utilise les codes ASCII au moyen de la touche Alt et des chiffres du pavé numérique.

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Complétez les phrases suivantes en mettant les expressions entre parenthèses à la forme appropriée :

All correct.

Complétez les phrases avec des pronoms réfléchis si nécessaire

1. I caught him looking at ..................in the windowpane.

I caught him looking at myself himself in the windowpane. Comme son nom l'indique, un pronom réfléchi renvoie l'action du verbe sur le sujet, pas sur un tiers. Si le sujet regardait un tiers, on emploierait le pronom personnel complément 3e personne, c'est-à-dire me, pas myself. Do you get it?

2, 3, 4 OK

Traduisez les phrases suivantes en anglais

All correct again. J'ai déjà lu (et éventuellement corrigé) ces mêmes phrases il n'y a pas si longtemps. Aurais-je affaire à un clan ou club de clones ?

[Naya Ternura]

Non! Désolée de vous faire corriger le même exercice deux fois. Je ne savais pas que vous l'aviez déjà corrigé pour quelqu'un d'autre.

Merci pour la correction mais je ne sais pas quelle est la réponse de cette phrase:

1. Elle ne supportait de voir ses serviteurs si mal traités. (bear)

She didn’t bear to see her servants so badly treated

She couldn’t bear to see her servants so badly treated

Est ce la première ou la seconde?

[Jean B]

Non ! Désolée de vous faire corriger le même exercice deux fois. Je ne savais pas que vous l'aviez déjà corrigé pour quelqu'un d'autre. No problem!

Merci pour la correction mais je ne sais pas quelle est la réponse de cette phrase :

1. Elle ne supportait de voir ses serviteurs si mal traités. (bear)

She didn’t bear to see her servants so badly treated

She couldn’t bear to see her servants so badly treated.

Est ce la première ou la seconde? Bien qu'elle soit grammaticalement irréprochable, la première formulation ne se dit pas. Efforce-toi de mémoriser un exemple de phrase comme My wife can't bear smelling petrol (c'est vrai ! ) Ma femme ne supporte pas l'odeur d'essence.

Ou encore I can't bear some racing cyclists' hypocrisy about doping. Je ne supporte pas l'hypocrisie de certains coureurs cyclistes sur le dopage. (c'est vrai aussi ! )