Correction d'une compréhension Orale - 3ème

[Hala]

Bonjour à tous,

A la rentrée, j'aurais une prise de parole en continu à l'oral sur un sujet précis, et j'ai besoin d'une correction complète si possible de ce que j'ai fais alors voici le sujet de mon devoir :

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Voici les adjectifs de la page 22 cités dans l'énoncée :

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Où j'en suis : Voici la préparation de ma compréhension orale :

Intouchables is a french film drama. It was realised in 2011. The directors are Olivier Nakache and Eric Toledano. It is the most

seen in France in 2011.The leads actors are : Omar Sy as Driss and Francois Cluzet as Philippe. After a paragliding accident,

Philippe is a rich aristocrat, who enlisted as a home help Driss, a young suburban just released from prison,although he had no

special training.The two different worlds of the two men will give rise to a friendship that will spark, with dramatic scenes but also

humorous. I like this movie because it is not only funny, it is also often touching. This movie is great because it is a film taken from

a real story. My favorite scene is when Omar gives a good lesson to the neighbor who parks his car just opposite the house of Phillippe.

Je compte sur vous, à très bientôt je l'espère.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Où j'en suis : Voici la préparation de ma compréhension orale :

Untouchables is a French drama film.- Tous les adjectifs de nationalités prennent une MAJUSCULE. Mémorise le.

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