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[Lve]

Bonsoir,

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J'ai fait ce que j'ai pu avec mes nombreuses lacunes, merci à vous.

I will talk about the media coverage of Kate's pregnancy. This news went round the world quickly, all press rushed in front hospital where Kate was admitted. These journalists, sent on the spot, were all agglutinated on a sidewalk pending any information. The only thing we learned is that Kate suffered from morning sickness. I do not understand the enthusiasm of press for pregnancy of Kate. I find useless to send journalists from all over the world for so few. They could have talk without going to London.

This exaltation of press is maybe the cause of a suicide. A nurse working in hospital was found dead shortly after Kate's hospitalization. She had been the victim of a hoax call by Australian radio. Press did not hesitated to associate this suicide with this bad joke. Anyways, I think that Kate's pregnancy unnecessarily invaded media, I understand that it can interest English, after all this baby is maybe future King of England, but from my French point of view this media excitement is superfluous.

Amicalement.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

I will am going to talk about the media coverage of Kate's pregnancy. This news went round the world quickly, all the whole press rushed in front of the hospital where Kate was admitted. These journalists, sent on the spot, were all agglutinated crowded together on a sidewalk pending waiting for any information. The only thing we learned is that Kate suffered from morning sickness. I do not understand the enthusiasm of the press for the pregnancy of Kate. I find useless to send journalists from all over the world for so few little. They could have talked about it without going to London.

This exaltation elation of the press is maybe may be the cause of a suicide. A nurse working in a hospital was found dead shortly after Kate's hospitalization. She had been the victim of a hoax call by an Australian radio. The press did not hesitated hesitate to associate this suicide with this bad joke.<Un modal DOIT toujours être suivi d'une Base Verbale. Anyway, I think that Kate's pregnancy unnecessarily invaded the media, I understand that it can interest English people, after all this baby is may be the future King of England, but from my French point of view this media excitement is superfluous.

[Lve]

Je te remercie !