Correction textes en anglais

[Perseverant]

bonjour je voudrai savoir si j'ai des fautes d'orthographes dans les textes que j'ai fait en anglais

texte 1 :

I've got an invitation from the Premiere of the film " Daddy, you're a Genius !" by Terry Sparks and the directors of Velocity Movies. Take place at the Shaftesbury Cinema on Saturday 5 May at 7 pm with smart and formal dress. I'd like you to accompany me !

texte 2 :

I received your invitation and I suggested to my friend to come with me. We agree to come to your invitation.

Thank you for this invitation.

Goodbye

texte 3 :

Place : City park

Date : Saturday-Sunday 17 and 18 July

Hours and price :

From 10 am to 23 pm on Saturday and from 9 am to 21 pm on Sunday.

Free for children up to 12 years.

Transport :

Free shuttle from parking lot outside the station

merci si quelqu'un peut me corriger ca

[Starvol]

Bonjour, malgré que je sois en quatrième, ne t'inquiète pas, j'ai le niveau B2 en anglais grâce au British Council.

texte 1 :

I've got an invitation for the Premiere of the film " Daddy, you're a Genius !" by Terry Sparks and the directors of Velocity Movies. Take place at the Shaftesbury Cinema on Saturday 5 May at 7 pm with smart and formal dress. I'd like you to accompany me !

texte 2 :

I received your invitation and I suggested to my friend to come with me. We agree to come. (Oui, tu répètes trop "invitation").

Thank you for your offer.

Goodbye

texte 3 :

Place : City park

Date : Saturday-Sunday 17 and 18 July

Hours and price :

From 10 am to 23 pm on Saturday and from 9 am to 21 pm on Sunday.

Free for children up to 12 years.

Transport :

Free shuttle from parking lot outside the station.