Exposé anglais

[Pauline_13]

Bonjour,

Quelqu'un pourrait il m'aider à corriger les fautes s'il y en a ?

Merci d'avance

In addition to the product customers want from Sony?

- A wide range of products

- A pleasant appearance

- Products for all needs and all tastes

- A good customer service

- FAQ Online

- User-friendliness

- Possibility to return a product (If it doesn’t satisfy us)

- To have products at the cutting edge of technology

- To have some retailers around the world

- A company and products who are eco-aware

- A short delivery time

- Quick repairs

- To have the latest updates

- Promotions for faithful customers

- A good reputation

- To make regularly Consumer survey

- Good value for money

- Technicians with skills

Advantages of customer service from Sony:

- Fast

-easiness of initial contact(phone, e-mail, instant messaging)

- Assistance Online (from experts and other users)

- Assistance specific for each product

- Technicians with skills

- Possibility to opine

- Repairs and breakdown service in less 24 hours

[Jean B]

Bonjiour,

In addition to the product customers want from Sony? <C'est une question, ça ? Rappel : mot interrogatif + auxiliaire do/does + sujet + BV (infinitif sans to). Rectifie-moi cette horreur !

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- A company and products who are eco-aware <Que sais-tu sur l'emploi des pronoms relatifs ?

-...//...

- Skilled technicians with skills

Advantages of customer service from Sony:

- Fast

-easiness of initial contact(phone, e-mail, instant messaging)

- Assistance Online (from experts and other users)

- Specific assistance for each product <L'adjectif DEVANT le nom !

- Skilled technicians with skills

- Possibility to give one's opinion opine est vraiment désuet.

- Repairs and breakdown service in less than 24 hours