entretien d'embauche, correction SVP

[Bibiss]

Bonjour,

nous devons simuler un entretien d'embauche pour le métier de Chef de Rang au Royaume-Unis. J'ai déjà préparé les questions et réponses, j'aimerai juste avoir une correction des fautes ou des tournures maladroite que j'ai pu employées.

Introduce yourself :

My name is Brendan, I am a french student. I am in London for my summer holidays. I study in a business school. I had my master degree last year.

Why did you answer to our announce?

As I am in London for three months, I am looking for a job. I would like to find a job in the restoration because I've already worked in this sector. Indeed last summer holiday I worked as a waiter in South of France. Moreover, this year while working toward my master degree, I was employed in an Irish pub in Paris. Furthermore, by this job I hope to improve my english and have new experiences.

What is your english level?

I have a good english. After my baccalaureat, I lived few months in New-Zealand and I have quickly improve my english. On the other hand, I have often practiced english for my job this year. So don't worry about my english, I think I am able to do this job.

Do you like team working?

Yes, I've always liked team working. Besides, when I was working as waiter last year, all the team appreciated my discipline and sociabilty. I am also energetic and I can bring dynamism into the team. Moreover, I am responsible and forward-thinking, that's why I want to be the team manager

Tell me your two main qualities :

I am sociable and easy going with people, clients must have a nice moment at the restaurant. Furthermore, I am able to adapt myself at the situation and solve a problem even if it's stressing.

Why should it be you the ideal candidate?

Firstly I am well-organized and efficient. Secondly my precedent jobs gived me the professional required experience. I can be creative, hard working and of course I am motivated.

Merci.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour,

Nous devons simuler un entretien d'embauche pour le métier de Chef de Rang au Royaume-Unis. <Il n'y en a qu'un ! J'ai déjà préparé les questions et réponses, j'aimerais juste avoir une correction des fautes ou des tournures maladroites que j'ai pu employéeser.

Introduce yourself :

My name is Brendan, I am a French student. I am in London for my summer holidays. I am studying in a business school. I had got my master's degree last year.

Why did you answer to our announce job advertisement?

As I am staying in London for three months, I am looking for a job. I would like to find a job in the restoration catering because I've already worked in this sector. Indeed last summer holiday I worked as a waiter in the South of France. Moreover, this year while working toward on my master's degree, I was employed in an Irish pub in Paris. Furthermore, by this job I hope to improve my English and have get some new experiences.

What is your English level?

I have a good My English is good. After taking my baccalaureat, I lived in New-Zealand for a few months and I have quickly improved my spoken English. On the other hand, I have often practiced talked in English for my job this year. So don't worry about my English, I think I am able to do this job.

Do you like team working?

Yes, I've always liked team working. Besides, when I was working as a waiter last year, all the team appreciated my discipline and sociabilty. I am also energetic and I can bring dynamism into the team. Moreover, I am responsible and forward-thinking, that's why I want to be the team manager.

Tell me your two main qualities :

I am sociable and easy going with people, clients must have a nice moment at the restaurant. Furthermore, I am able to adapt myself at to the any situation and solve a problem even if it's stressing.

Why should it be you the ideal candidate?

Firstly I am well-organized and efficient. Secondly my precedent previous jobs gived <Hou, le vilain !provided me with the professional required experience. I can be creative, hard working and of course I am motivated.