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Bonjour, pouvez-vous me corriger mon expression s'il vous plaît ? Merci

September 4^t, 1957 was not an ordinary school day for Elizabeth Eckford in Little Rock.

Elizabeth was one of the 9 black students join a "white school". That is to say a school where all the students are white. In 1954, there was a law to abolish segregation on schools but in 1957, schools were still segregated in Little Rock (Arkansas - Southern States of America). So, Elizabeth Eckford tried to attend Little Rock school, a segregation school. She wanted to have better education, as schools for whites were better reputed.To my mind, she was very brave and it was very difficult and very hard for her because I suppose some white people were opposed to desegregation. They didn't want to obey the law. They are racists. They persecuted her, they were violents, furious, they shouted and bullied her. She was certainly heart psychologically by what she saw and what she heard. It was stricking. She seemed very passive. She couldn't act as she wanted. She was escorted by the army. I think, the soldiers wanted to make sure she was not physically hurt.

For the little Rock Nine, the battle was only beginning.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

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Elizabeth was one of the 9 black students who joined a "white school"....//...

So, Elizabeth Eckford tried to attend Little Rock school, a segregated school....//...

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[minounenette]

Bonjour et merci voici ma correction :

September 4^th, 1957 was not an ordinary school day for Elizabeth Eckford in Little Rock.

Elizabeth was one of the 9 black students to join a "white school". That is to say a school where all the students are white. In 1954, there was(je ne comprends pas pourquoi c'est faux? a law to abolish segregation in schools but in 1957, schools were still segregated in Little Rock (Arkansas - Southern States of America). So, Elizabeth Eckford tried to attend Little Rock school, a segregated school. She wanted to have a better education, as schools for whites were better reputed.To my mind, she was very brave and it was very difficult and very hard for her because I suppose some white people were opposed to desegregation. They didn't want to obey the law. They were racists. They persecuted her, they were violent, furious, they shouted and bullied her. She was certainly hurt psychologically by what she saw and what she heard. It was shocking. She seemed very passive. She couldn't act as she wanted. She has be escorted by the army. I think, the soldiers wanted to make sure she was not physically hurt.

For the Little Rock Nine, the battle was only beginning.

[Jean B]

September 4^th, 1957 was not an ordinary school day for Elizabeth Eckford in Little Rock.

Elizabeth was one of the 9 black students to join a "white school". That is to say a school where all the students are white. In 1954, there was (je ne comprends pas pourquoi c'est faux ?]<Où donc ai-je écrit que c'était faux ? Sans le savoir, aurais-tu besoin de consulter un(e) ophtalmologiste ? a law to abolish segregation in schools but in 1957, schools were still segregated in Little Rock (Arkansas - Southern States of America). So, Elizabeth Eckford tried to attend a Little Rock school, a segregated one. She wanted to have a better education, as schools for whites were better reputed.To my mind, she was very brave and it was very difficult and very hard for her because I suppose some white people were opposed to desegregation. They were racists. They persecuted her, they were violent, furious, they shouted and bullied her. She was certainly hurt psychologically by what she saw and what she heard. It was shocking. She seemed very passive. She couldn't act as she wanted. She was <( le prétérit puisque c'est toujours le récit d'un événement passé, terminé, daté) escorted by the army. I think <(pas de virgule puisque that est sous-entendu qui introduit la proposition relative) the soldiers wanted to make sure she was not physically hurt.

For the Little Rock Nine, the battle was only beginning.