Vérification d'une traduction

[Je ne sais point]

Bonjour, j'aurais voulu de l'aide pour me corriger pour aujourd'hui au plus tard. J'ai eu eu une image à décrire, j'aurais voulu que quelq'un puisse me corriger si il y a des erreurs, et si il y aurait d'autres choses a dire sur cette image que j'aurais oublier de rajouter(fichier joind). Merci d'avance pour l'aide.

This document is a colour drawing. The document about the attack of September 11th, 2001 in New York. It praises the intervention a firemans and policemans this day there.

We can see that the draftsman is served different color contrasts. In the background , he used bright colors to highlight the two men and the color of the flag. But he used a low contrast darker. On top in close up wee can see two men, one is a fareman and the other it is a policeman, there are fixed glance. In back them, it perceives the American flag in bright color, which symbolizes the nation they serve.

The center of the drawing, you can see three firefighters one of them holds a child in her arms, and another holds a fire hose to extinguish assuming feu.et two policemen. It shows the different actions that achieve these men rescue and help.

In the foreground,you can see buildings in flames and destroyed. Thus a chain of firefighter clear away the rubble.

The aim of the draftsman is to show devotion, the courage of these men. Who are sacrificed to help the victims of the attack. And He wants to emphasize that these men are somehow heroes, and that many of these men are dead. The draftsman wanted to make a tribute to all those men who are giving their lives to be saved others.

[Je ne sais point]

En regardant les autres discutions je m'apercois que personne ne répond lorsque que l'on utilise google traduction ou autre. Mais je pense que c'est nécessaire pour du vocabilaire, certe pour des phrases non mais des mots oui. Car la langue anglaise reste gramaticalement compliquer. Car nous étudiants nous n'avons que 2h d'anglais ou plus et c'est difficile de parler correctement anglais. Dans cette description je confirme avoir utiliser un traducteur mais seulment pour des expressions ou mots car je me suis aussi aider de mon livre ainsi que d'un dico, donc je voudrais quand même que l'on puisse m'aider sur le travail que j'ai fait. Merci d'avance!

[Je ne sais point]

Pourrais je avoir de l'aide ?!

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Petite mise au point : en règle générale, je ne refuse pas d'offrir mon aide mais il y a des cas où il faut arrêter de me prendre pour le magicien qui va tout arranger d'un coup de sa baguette.

Je ne vais donc pas faire ton travail à ta place car il me faudrait tout reprendre de zéro ou presque mais juste te dire que tu as un sacré culot pour oser publier un tel tissu d'erreurs sur ce forum.

Tu as du souci à te faire si tu es vraiment en Terminale.

Reprends ta description en t'aidant de la fiche d'anglaisfacile : http://www.anglaisfacile.com/pages/mie/presenter-document-iconographique-anglais.php

Mets-toi vite au travail et va lire les conseils que je viens de donner à Sissi149 un peu plus bas sur la page.

[Je ne sais point]

Je vois pas qu'elle culot, mais bon. Dans le texte j'ai fais comme la fiche, la nature, la description et le but. Il y a bcp de choses aux quelles je ne peux repondre comme la légende, la source...

[Je ne sais point]

Voila, j'ai suivi vos indication en reprenant le texte et j' ai essayer de corriger les fautes que j'ai pu voir; merci de m'aider au cas que j'n aurais oublier merci.

This document is a drawing. It was drawn by Palmer, a peinter.The document about the attack of September 11th, 2001 in New York. It praises the intervention a firemans and policemans this day there. It represents

We can see that the draftsman ,this is served of different contrasts. Behind , he used bright colors to highlight the two men and the flag . In front of, it is a close-up, we can see two men, there are a policeman and a fireman. They have a fixed and neutral look. Behind them, there is the American flag with bright colours ,which symbolizes the nation they serve.

To the right and to the left, we can see three firefighters one of them holds a child in her arms, and another holds a fire hose to extinguish fire.et two policemen. It shows the different work of this men :rescue and help.

In the foreground,you can see buildings in flames and destroyed. And lots of firefighter clear away the rubble, of buldings.

The aim of the draftsman is to show devotion, the courage of these men. Who are sacrificed to help the victims of the attack. And He wants to emphasize that these men are somehow heroes, and that many of these men are dead. The draftsman wanted to make a tribute to all those men who are gave their lives to be saved others.

[Jean B]

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