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[coco88]

Bonjour pouvez vous coruge ma redaction en aglais svp . c'est sur moi et le cinema .

Pouvez vous me corrige et m aide a mettre de meilleures chose svp .

Merci d'avance .

Où j'en suis :

Voici ma redac :

I love going to movies, primarily for watching movies. Films that I like, interesting films, moving, exciting, ...

J enjoys movies because the seats are comfortable, we are plunged into darkness. J likes the smell of popcorn and the advantage of watching good movies with an image quality and exceptional sound. I love going to movies because I need to have some adrenaline with a good film on a giant screen. The film is like a new dimension as soon as I enter I feel stress and forget the outside world. The advantage is that the film compared to films that are on TV movies film are more exciting on the one hand because the sound quality is better and also you can smell the aroma of ice cream, popcorn, chips, ...

I like movies because it allows us to live all the lives that we can never live. We learn about the world and about oneself, having, for an hour or two, escaped himself.

I love going to the movies with my friends and family. I love all kinds of film: action film, drama, horror movie, comedy movie, fantasy movie, thriller, love story ...

I go to the movies about twice by me, when I get the chance.

The movies I like are: American Pie, street dance, the Little White Lies, Twilight, Scream 4, Match Point, Titanic, Final Destination, Paranormal, The Pursuit of Marsuplami, Pianist, ...

My favorite artists are mostly of American actors and actresses.

My favorite actors are:

• Brenda Strong)

• Teri Hatcher

• Felicity Huffman

• Marcia Cross

• Eva Longoria

• James Denton

• Ricardo Antonio Chavira

• Nicollette Sheridan

• Richard Burgi

• Mark Moses

• Doug Savant

• Dana Delany

• Bethany Joy Lenz

• Katie Holmes

• Nicole Kidman

• Lucy Liu

• Lindsay Lohan

• Jennifer Aniston

• Julia Roberts

• Angelina Jolie

• John's Garden

• ...

I also like watching series like Desperate Housewives, Gossip Girl, Grey's Anatomy, Medium, House Doctor, ...

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

I love going to the movies, primarily for watching to watch movies.