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[Invité]

Salut en fete on devait inventer un souvenir et on parlait à son journal intime. Je n'arrive pas a cooriger mes erreurs alors corriger moi. Merci d'avance.

Hello dear diary, yesterday was the best day of my life because it was my birthday. I was twenty years old. I celebrated my birtday with my friends. My parents went to the cinema. With my friends we sang , laughed and drink a beer it was really funny. A little later, when my parents came in home, there was Shakira with them. It was a surpise for me. I cried of happiness. My friends was excited. Shakira gave me one ticket for went to see her concert. My friends were really jealous. My birthaday was extraordinary, it was really incredible

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Salut,

En fete fait, on devait inventer un souvenir et on parlait à son journal intime. Je n'arrive pas a corriger mes erreurs, alors corrigerz-moi. Merci d'avance.