Besoin d'aide pour un petit DM

[theo02]

Bonsoir à tous,

Voila j'ai un petit DM à faire sur le sujet de notre choix. Passionné de sport, je l'ai fait sur les Jeux Olympiques de Londres. J'ai fait du mieux que j'ai pu en cherchant dans le dictionnaire, etc.. mais je sollicite votre aide pour détecter éventuellement quelques erreurs et avoir votre avis.

From July 27th till August 12th of this year will take place the 30th edition of the modern Olympics. And among the candidate cities, it is London which was chosen, in particular versus Paris, Moscow or still New York. After the magnificent J.O of Peking in 2008, the challenge will be hard to find for English. The budget of departure was 3,4 billion books(pounds) but it almost tripled and it is now 9,3 billion pounds. The plan is exceptional. There will be not less than 24 000 persons to assure the security. About more than 10 000 athletes 200 countries will be in confrontation. There will be this year 302 events distributed on 26 sports. Among the inescapable places of this Olympiad, there will be of course the Olympic stadium with a capacity of 80 000 places. It is here that will take place the opening ceremony and the closing ceremony. It is as well in this stadium as will take place finale of the 100m which will see maybe the coronation of the Jamaican Usain Bolt. There is aura also magnificent London Aquatics Center or the immense stadium of Wembley. This Olympics Games have got everything to be a success … French Side, David Douillet hopes to beat the record of Peking which was 41 medals. He also hopes that the French delegation will bring back at least 14 golden medals of its stay in London. A practicable objective in view of the good shape of the French sport. The choice of the three-colored standard bearer will be made between Laura Flessel and Tony Parker. Then sports friends, this summer, make us dream!

Merci d'avance,

Théo

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

From July 27th till August 12th of this year the 30th edition of the modern Olympics will take place in London.