Devoir Maison pour lundi 7 mai.

[lauraak]

Bonjour à tous ,

J'ai un devoir maison en anglais à faire pour le lundi 7 mai, j'aimerais que vous me corrigiez mes fautes (si il y en a), que vous m'aidiez à trouver d'autres phrases au present perfect et au preterit car je n'en ai pas trop mis et que vous me donniez votre avis sur mon DM .

Le sujet : Write an e-mail. You have created a video game and want to sell it to a developer. You write an e-mail to the manager of a famous video company in order to present your project. Use the present perfect and the past simple ( prétérit).

Dears Mr Price,

I'm sending you an e-mail because i have created a video game and i want to sell it to a developer. So i decide to present you my project. You have to know that it's the first time i have created a video game. The name of my video game is Mario Kart DS, it's a video game of race, there are Mario who is the character principal and his friends (and enemies). There is a lot of circuit, we can chose our favourite character then we can start the game and do the crazy race. Also, you can throw various object as banana skin or fireball on competitor in order to pass them and win the race. There! the presentation is finish, i hope that you enjoy my project!

Thank you for you consideration. If you have any questions or concerns don't hesitate to let me know.

Sincerely.

Merci d'avance.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Le sujet : Write an e-mail. You have created a video game and want to sell it to a developer. You write an e-mail to the manager of a famous video company in order to present your project. Use the present perfect and the past simple ( prétérit).

Dears Mr Price,

I'm sending you an e-mail because <Inutile i I have created a video game and i I want to sell it to a developer.