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[soso2012]

bonjour je dois écrire une lettre en répondant a un correspondant

voilà se que j'ai mis

hello,

I saw that you live in Australia, I notice two activities that I would like to visit if you agree. I notice the melbourne aquarium because I love seeing sharks swim in the ocean and also fish (the brochure and beautiful) and I would also like to visit Healesville Sanctuary, because I have never seen wild animals that live in Australia and I really want to see and photograph them also

Cheers Stephan

Merçi d'avance pour ce qui vont m'aider

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour,

Je dois écrire une lettre en répondant a à un correspondant.

Voilà se ce que j'ai mis.