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[Maya d'Ange]

Bonjour. Je poste ici mon exposé d'anglais avec pour pensée qu'une personne pourra m'aider. J'ai de très fortes lacunes, et bien que (croyez-le!) je m'améliore peu à peu, il m'est indispensable de le faire corriger avant que le jour fatal n'arrive, et qu'accompagnée de mes amies, je doive parler longuement en cette langue.

Je vous remercie de m'aider d'avance !

Maya*

P.S.: Ceci est la suite d'un exposé, l'absence de mots-liens ou une suite de texte résultant d'un non sens s'expliquent également par un travail de groupe. Ce que vous lirez ci-dessous n'est donc que ma partie.

Disney always rhymes with fairy tales, where kisses and scenes of tenderness show every age and every mores. Thus, at the appearance of White-Snow in 1937, the big question asked on a kiss … or not !

In every age corresponds a way of kissing, and Walt Disney didn’t want hustle the convention on this subject. But finally, a kiss took place, although it was very, very chaste.

But which are thus, the most beautiful kisses of Walt Disney ?

·

The most Famous =>

The

Lady and The Vagabond

(1955)

= This is them who invented the fashion of Spaguetti-kiss !

·

The longest =>

Pocahontas

(1995)

= Because it’s a picture more modernized ; mores have changed !

·

The Jazziest =>

The Aristocats

(1970)

= It’s on a roof, in Paris that the distinguished Duchesse was falling in live with Thomas O’Malley, the alley cat.

!!!An Animal kissing is difficult to stage because it’s shots of tongues or touch of muzzle

Thus we are coming at …

·

The most animal => The 101 dalmatians (1961)

·

The most romantic =>

Cinderella

(1950)

= Because it is the charming prince ! The first kiss takes place on the steps of the palace while the second, more enthusiastic, enclosed the film and the scene blends into the last page.

·

The most audacious =>

The Lion King

(1994)

= The most beautiful Disney for me !

It’s the most audacious because, background of the Elton John’s song « The love shines under stars », it’s Nala, the femalen who takes the first step.

·

The most modern =>

Raiponce

(2010)

= Because it is already Raiponce who takes the first step and because ths cartoon isn’t part of logic of wedding.

Walt Disney has cornered a long time the market of the cinema for young public. In fact, it was ths 40’s until the 80’s.

But in the 90’s, a new technology took a lot of place in film production, and mainly, in the field of animation.

à It is the appearance of the films in computer graphics.

… And Walt Disney is not in ! He tried to reconcile whith his audience thanks to sequences of adventures that have made his success (Bambi 2, The Little Mermaid 2, …) but this cartoons lose in quality of content compared to the first, and especially, they didn’t evolve in terms of quality graphics.

In 2006, Walt Disney came back thanks to his alliance with Pixar, a competent and successfull company for this time. Thus, Dreamworks was ths only competitor of Disney now.

The acquisition of Pixar animations studios costed 7.4 billion of american dollars, but whatever ! Now, Walt Disney ownes ths new trend of the computer graphics that appears as the new support (/medium) of the cartoons.

Eventually, we see now, with a step back that the last animated film, with the Pixar’s collaboration, is very sucessfull ! and the last example in date : Up !

Thus Walt Disney had been saving by Pixar and began the XXI century.