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[Aure_lie]

Bonjour !

J'aimerais bien une correction pour ce texte si possible, car il y a des phrases pour lesquelles je ne suis pas sûre.

Sorry for answering so late, but like you asked I go in trip so I wasn't at home I couldn't answer. Let me explain you. Like you now I told you my mother and me wanted to go to Italy but my father didn't like travel, but my mother tried to make him understand that it is not expensive for Easter holiday so might as well enjoy (--> Je voulais mettre que ma mère a essayé de lui faire comprendre que ce n'est pas cher pour des vacances de Pâques donc autant en profiter). So we went to Italy for two weeks. We take the car and drive over there it's take us two days. Actually we were in Tuscany is a region in Central Italy here we were in an hotel with an amazing view over the lake Garda which is the largest lake in Italy. Let alone all the activities they propose indeed there were a swimming pool , a sauna, billiards, a bowling, a tennis court, a room of fitness , a Jacuzzi, and a large dining room. The dishes were appetizing and delicious. And we went to see the arena of Verona the city of Romeo and Juliette. We saw the costume and the decorate of the spectacle it was really remarkable. I think it's was the best memory about this holidays. Also I saw the famous The leaning Tower of Pisa because it leaned. And my father took a photo with my sister who made seeming to push the tower it was pretty succeeded. I will show you. The landscapes fell me with wonder it was really outstanding. Now I hope to go Ireland because I like the music and the landscape there are over there. Say hello to your family for me.

Merci à vous d'avance !

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Sorry for answering so late, but like as you asked, I go had gone in on a trip, so I wasn't at home, I couldn't answer. Let me explain to you. Like As you know, I told you my mother and me I wanted to go to Italy but my father didn't like travel, but so my mother tried to make him understand that it is was not expensive for Easter holiday, so we might as well enjoy take advantage of it. (--> Je voulais mettre que ma mère a essayé de lui faire comprendre que ce n'est pas cher pour des vacances de Pâques donc autant en profiter). So we went to Italy and stayed there for two weeks. We take the car and drive drove over there, it's take it took us two days. Actually we were in Tuscany, is a region in Central Italy. Nouvelle phrase> here We were stayed in at an a hotel with an amazing view over the Lake Garda which is the largest lake in Italy. Let alone all the activities they propose indeed there were a swimming pool, a sauna, billiards, a bowling alley, a tennis court, a room of fitness room, a jacuzzi and a large dining room. The dishes were appetizing and delicious. And we went to see the arena of Verona, the city of Romeo and Juliette. We saw the costumes and the decorate of the spectacle play scenery, it was really remarkable. I think it's was the best memory about this holidays. Also I also saw the famous The leaning Tower of Pisa because it leaned. Selon toute vraisemblance, Monsieur de Lapalisse n'est toujours pas mort ! And my father took a photo with my sister who made seeming pretended to push the tower, it was pretty succeeded well successful. I will show you. The landscapes fell filled me with wonder, it was really outstanding. Now I hope to go to Ireland because I like the music and the landscapes there are over there. Say hello to your family for me.

[Aure_lie]

Merci monsieur !