Exposé : commentaire sur le film Terminator 2

[l'intello]

Bonjours,

Je dois faire un commentaire en anglais, sur le film Terminator 2. Voici le type de commentaire dont n doit s'inspiré :

This is a scary Movie entitled The silence of the Lanbs. It was a realized by Jonathan D. in 1991 in america. This is a Psychological Movie because which deals with a serial killer called of Buffalo Bill an FBI agent who is Clarice Starling and Jack R., the boss. So, the film is an investigation by Clarice to find the criminal with the help of hannibal lecter who is in the jail. Dr Hannibal was Buffalo's psychiatrist: So the scenes turn arround the complex relation between the investigated and the investigator. In fact the characters are stange and uncommun. Morever there is less action and more agressive dialogues. The scenes are stressful and the music is scary. On my opinion this is a psychological subject succesfully realized by experienced and good actors like Judie Foster and antony hopking.

Voici le début de mon commentaire sur Terminator 2 :

This is a Action and Thriller movie entitled Terminator 2 : Judgement Day . It was a realized by James Cameron in 1996 in america. This is a Science-Fiction movie because which deals with a robot-killer called of T-800.

J'ai quelques difficulté pour faire la suite, j'ai besoin d'aide

[Jean B]

Voici le début de mon commentaire sur Terminator 2 :

This is an action and thriller movie entitled Terminator 2 : Judgement Day . It was a realized by James Cameron in 1996 in America. This is a Science-Fiction movie because which it deals with a robot-killer called of T-800.

[l'intello]

Merci pour ta réponse mais ce n'est pas vraiment ça le problème. Je dois rédiger la suite grace à l’exemple mais j'arrive pas à le faire. J'ai besoin de ton aide stp tu es le seul qui me répond stp.

[Jean B]

Taratata, ce n'est pas à moi de faire TON travail, qui plus est un dimanche après-midi, désolé.

[l'intello]

This is an action and thriller movie entitled Terminator 2 : Judgement Day . It was realized by James Cameron in 1996 in America. This is a Science-Fiction movie because it deals with a two cyborg or robot called T-800 and T-1000 are sent from the future, the T-1000's mission is to eliminate John Connor and the other to protect him (T-800). This is a movie race against time, whoever wins this race will succeed this mission. The music and the story is very well understood and action is present with many stunt scenes and finally a lot of special effects. On my opinion, this second film in the Terminator saga is best that the first with a good story and good actor like Arnold Shrazzeneger and Edward Furlong.

[Jean B]

This is an action and thriller movie entitled Terminator 2 : Judgement Day . It was realized by James Cameron in 1996 in America. This is a Science-Fiction movie because it deals with a two cyborgs or robots called T-800 and T-1000 which are sent from the future. Nouvelle phrase> the T-1000's mission is to eliminate John Connor and the other one's,T-800, to protect him. This is a movie race against time, whoever wins this race will succeed make a success of this mission. The music and the story is are very well understood and action is present with many stunt scenes and finally a lot of special effects. In my opinion, this second film in the Terminator saga is best better that than the first one with a good story and good actors like Arnold Shrazzeneger and Edward Furlong.

[l'intello]

Mdr, Merci pour ton aide ! Franchement, un grand merci !

[l'intello]

This is an action and thriller movie untitled Terminator 2 : Judgement Day . It was realized by James Cameron in 1996 in America. This is a Science-Fiction movie because it deals with two cyborgs called T-800 and T-1000 which are sent from the future. The T-1000's mission is to eliminate John Connor and the other one's, T-800, to protect him. This is a race against time, whoever The one who wins this race will make a success of this mission. The music is very well to hear and the action is present with many stunt scenes and finally a lot of special effects. In my opinion, this second film in the Terminator saga is better than the first one with a good story and good actors like Arnold Shrazzeneger and Edward Furlong.

Voila la version finale, encore des fautes ?

[yveslouis]

This is an action and thriller movie uentitled Terminator 2 : Judgement Day . It was realized by James Cameron in 1996 in America. This is a Science-Fiction movie because it deals with two cyborgs called T-800 and T-1000 which are/have been sent from the future. The T-1000's mission is to eliminate John Connor and the other one's, T-800, to protect him. This is a race against time, whoever The one who wins this race will make a success of this mission. The music is very well to hear captivating and the action is present with many stunt scenes and finally a lot of special effects. In my opinion, this second film in the Terminator saga is better than the first one with a good story and good actors like Arnold Shrazzeneger Schwarzenegger and Edward Furlong.

Voila la version finale, encore des fautes ? A few ones.