Rédiger a partir de notes

[Meely]

Alors voilà, ma prof d'anglais nous fait écouter un témoignage d'une fille. Il faut faire des notes sur ce témoignage pour ensuite le rédiger. Je bosse dessus depuis 2 soirs, et je n'arrive pas a rédiger.

Voici les notes que j'ai faites :

INTRO

Part 1 : Dovie Thomason = story teller

native people, america

father kayowa apache

mother lokota

This personn introducer herself as Dovie she say she is...

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part 2

Fell in love / stories when just a girl ( she was particulary attracted to them from a very early )

really fortunate / father told stories

She fell..with stories when she was....

And she say she was... because...them

I of all the nine = chilldren

my family

down to themm = stories

He would tell me stories about the stars => renvoi au passé = rupture avec le présent + compatible avec une idée d'habitude

So different (from) greek & roman mytho

was earing in school

The stories she was told were a lot different from those of the geek ...she was tld at school

My grand mother => stories = animals,heroes,women,of geat power => my GD would tell me stories about...

Part 3

Usally stories told to me

in reporte to

some behaviour = wasn't quite acceptable

My GD would gently.. stories about (misbehaving,rude turtle, grreedy monster)

surranded/them = she insist

4 ) was used to respecting dead. those who she taught me difficult to believe. a Time i would be a speaker. A teacher of culture. But in urban communities there is need communities they was a need to regoin contact with their culture

5 ) perdre sa culture because have been assimilated into mainstream culture.

have been mooving away from. spoken words oral culture becaome very americanized. technological. net (even). print-literate. so, she started telling stories in communitiy centers first et foremost

cultures continues, dovy was culture to continus so that kids be nurtured and nourished because culture is a strong source. confidente. strenght. who they we (identity) and where they come from.

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CONCLUSION

6) Finally, stories give her apreciations and passion "for own culture" grand mother gives to her passion about spoken to word and from tells stories and watch children stimulated by memorized . fascinated. wonderful

[Meely]

J'ai vraiment besoin qu'on m'aide ...