Correction d'un exercice type bac

[woodycup]

Bonjour tout le monde voilà j'ai un ptit soucis de difficulté en anglais et nouveau sur le forum, se serait avec plaisir de recevoir votre correction concernant ce sujet Le courage 300 mots maxi total j'en ai fait 317 environ soyez indulgent dans vos correction je ne suis pas au bac mais je me prépare nuance dans merci pour vos correction a venir.

Courage is first and foremost the character and ethics that is built over the experiments. It may be physical courage, braving a danger to save a life, but it's actually quite rare. This is especially a moral force which results in micro-and acts that never gained. And sometimes, life brings us trials like serious illness or death of a loved one: it is not really so very brave without realizing it. Being courageous is that his convictions are not recognized by everyone.

It is also tame his fears as if in a company, it gets treated like a nobody.

It's function again after a trauma, rape, torture. Nevertheless we must live and learn to love life again.

This is dared to change life, change jobs or find work after redundancy without much feeling sorry for yourself.

Daring to say what you feel and really take her feelings. You feel better when you verbalize things. All that is calculated or concealment is exhausting.

Courage is contagious.

Many years ago, courage only showed itself by physical force, facing up to the danger. But by now, that conception of courage is obsolete. There are still people who show physical courage as saving lives, and I admire it. But nowadays, courage or, rather, its vision is something else. The courage is the ability to overcome fear, but not necessarily physically. Courage is to be not what others want we are. It's necessary to be courageous to stand up when you feel that beliefs to which you believe deeply are attacked. So, courage isn't to lower the head or closing the eyes when our values and principles are violated. Thus Tim isn't a coward as people would call him, contrariwise. He showed his courage by saying "NO" by escaping his country because he didn't want to remove any human being's life. So He got the nerve to show his opinions.

j'ai pas vraiment suivi une structure exact pour cette exercice c'est le regroupement d'idée si vous voulez brouillon merci d'avance pour votre guidance avisée pour un futur bachelier.

[Jean B]

NB : La réponse ci-dessous, initialement donnée par mp, est mise en ligne par suite de la réaction négative du questionneur.

Ainsi, chacun pourra juger en son âme et conscience si le fait que je corrige également les fautes de français " n'est pas très intelligent " (sic) de ma part.

JRB

Bonjour,

Voilà j'ai un petit soucis Petit moyen mnémotechnique pour ne plus refaire cette faute : "la souris n'a aucun souci " de difficulté en anglais et nouveau sur le forum, se ce serait avec plaisir de recevoir votre correction concernant ce sujet Le courage 300 mots maxi total. J'en ai fait 317 environ, soyez indulgents dans vos corrections. Je ne suis pas au bac mais je me m’y prépare, nuance. dans Merci pour vos corrections a à venir.