Correction D'une Expression Écrite En Anglais

[yuna-chan]

Bonjour pourriez-vous s'il vous plaie me corriger cette expression?je sais que j'ai surement beaucoup de faute:)Merci d'avance!.

Cordialement!

Many times we say, "What does not kill us makes us stronger." This expression is often true because every day we are faced with various difficulties.That they are grave or simple problems we owercoming a large number of events.It is these obstacles which prevent us from following our own way.However It is necessary to consider these problems as an occasion to know us better and to learn something new and to improve us.

In the daily life we meet difficulties and to face these difficulties we have only two options possible: avoiding or dealing.I think that if we are strong enough mentally we are able to overcome it.We know all that it is only after having overcome a difficulty that we find the necessary strength to face the following obstacles.

For example at the school, we often meet difficulties in certain subjects.Often I do not understand some chapters and have difficulty writing in French at the test.I have also considerable difficulty in math.Dring years I had these difficulties and tried to do my best to move forward and to get out.. But with the help of some teachers and friends who helped me, I managed.Besides for that, I needed a lot of will,of perseverence and personal work.But today I can say that I still have some work.The most important thing in all it,it is that we must necessary to trust in his own ability to succeed and in itself.Even if the time remains our worst enemy in this sets of success and the will our best trump card.These experiences that i lived in my schooling rendered me stronger and more sure of myself.I would also like add that when we want we can.

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Par suite d'un nouveau blocage avec les balises de citation, je viens de t'adresser ma correction exceptionnellement par mp.

Si tu avais le moindre souci de compréhension, n'hésite pas à me le faire savoir.