Résumé D'un Texte (Seconde Section Européenne)

[alexandredu29]

Bonjour.

Pour demain je dois faire un résumé sur un texte portant sur un extrait de "My Country" écrit par Anthony Davies.

Sachant que le professeur est très exigeant et nous demande beaucoup, je ne peux pas me permettre de faire des fautes et c'est pourquoi je fais appel à vous.

Je souhaite que vous m’aidiez à rendre un travail sans faute afin de progresser et de ne pas subir les grognements de mon professeur.

Voici mon texte :

One day, Andefra, a immigrant went to the Immigration Officer. Maria, a civil servant told he his identity was confirmed. Moreover, his papers was confirmed. Andefra was officialy England citizen.

A few minutes later, he collected his allowance and he bought some shopping. He was so happy to be freedom ! Buy all he wants, it was so good !

Moments later, at home, he thought that he could become a friend of his neighbours ! But actually, it was false. Because he was disturbed by the neighbours' music, he decided to requested if they could turn down the music but a man called Paul told him "go home" by calling he "sponger". Andefra had insisted politely and Paul seem dislike Andefra !

At the evening, Andefra read Harry Potter.

Days later, when he came home from Sainsbury's, in front of the Elevator, he met Paul's son. He wanted to speak with the younger man, whereas Paul told him to don't speak with Andefra. A few seconds later, Paul's wife cAME and she apologized her husband and her son.

When the lift arrived, a muslim family left the Elevator and because Andrefa wanted to be polite, he said hello, and any answer ! He was confused thereafter and he didn't understand the reason why they don't answer !

He came in the lift with Thomas and his mother.

Suddenly the lift arrived at the floor twenty, they left the elevator. On the contrary of her husband, Jenny (paul's wife) was nice to meet Andefra. As regards Thomas, he wanted to shake Andrefa's hand.

Pourriez-vous me corriger les fautes svp?

Merci d'avance,

Alexandre.