Correction D'une Expression

[Cl3mixx]

Bonjour chers correcteurs, mon professeur d'anglais m'a donné une expression à faire cependant elle mérite d'être corriger et énormément puisque je suis vraiment nulle en anglais, serait-ce possible de prendre un peu le temps de corriger mes fautes et (je sais c'est beaucoup demandé) m'aider à ne plus faire les fautes que je fais , Merci d'avance.

Voilà le sujet de mon expression : " Do you think tourism should be restricted to preserve histrorical and natural sites"

Mon expression (attention ça fais mal aux yeux les fautes ) :

Since the beginning of 21 century, many people interested in theEcology's question. Especialy a lovers of history and nature sincethey have affraid that the flow of tourist degrades their sites.

First we are going toward a loss of natural sites but also a lossof wildlife and will be subject to any ecological disaster. Howeverwe need the wildlife. For example if we don't have wasp then polenisn't deleted so there are more allergies.

Secondly tourismdegraded history's sites indeed the fact oh breathing deep paints.Thus the professional make indentical reproductions of real site asthe Caves of Lascaux, which closed to public in 1958. Yet is itreally serious ?

History is something that is past and we tell theevents thanks to famous Monument but this is not essential forunderstanding our history. Thebasis of our current culture is not in the things that our ancestorsbuilt, but in the knowledge they learned and they provide us. Forinstance TheParthenon represents democracy, however things that the Greeks wereable to do with democracy, they invented, is more importan to know. Moreover,tourism is a very important activity for some countries. for examplein Egypt, through the remains of the Pharaonic era,theEgyptianswhowork at these sites can to live almost correctly,even in Nepal,Peru,asw. Finallyin my opinion,ecology is a major problem which we must be verycareful, however, the closure of historic sites and natural is not asolution, nevertheless we know that a small gesture is not smalllorqui we have 6 billion to do so. If necessary close our historicaland natural sites and save our planet.

Encore merci de m'aider d'avance

Clémence