Correction Texte

[Lorena12]

Bonsoir,

Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît localiser les quelques erreurs possible dans ce texte ?

J'ai un examen oral lundi et vous me seriez d'une grande aide.

The 11th March a earthquake terryfied japanes, followed by a killer tsunami and a nuclear accident.

The natural disaster didn't spare japon. And now it will need a lot of money to remake this land.

It's the most severe earthquake in modern time since 1923.

However, japan is equip with a early warning system. But it wasn't sufisant.

The survivors tell us about hirrible consequences for their life. There are a lot of victims.

Survivors have saw their family, their friends, their neighbours dead. The region is devasted, people have lost their own home and family.

It's a really big tragedy and it always will be a bad keepsake.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonsoir,

Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît localiser les quelques erreurs possibles dans ce texte ?

J'ai un examen oral lundi et vous me seriez d'une grande aide.

The On 11th March, an earthquake terrified Japanese; it was followed by a killer tsunami and a nuclear accident.

The natural disaster didn't spare Japan. And now it will need a lot of money to remake rebuild this land.

It's been the most severe earthquake in modern times since 1923.

However, Japan is equipped with an early warning system. But it wasn't sufisant sufficient/enough.

The Survivors tell us about the horrible consequences for their lives. There are a lot of victims.

Survivors have saw seen their families, their friends, their neighbours dead. The region is devastated, people have lost their own homes and families.

It's a really big tragedy and it always will always be a bad keepsake memory.

[Lorena12]

Un énorme merci ! et aussi merci pour les petits conseils....

[Jean B]

Un énorme merci ! et aussi merci pour les petits conseils....