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[Invité]

Bonsoir, quelqu'un pourrait t-il m'aider a corriger les fautes de ma lettre ? Merci beaucoup d'avance.

Dear Sir,

We are looking for a UK partner to develop ourbusiness in the united kingdom. Our company, whose headquarters are in Herblay,near Paris, sells up market. Attached a line graph focuses on the fluctuationsof Secam’s sales of organic food between 2004 and 2010. We can notice that from2004 to 2006 there was a slight increase of five thousand to ten thousandsales, from 2006 to 2007 there was a surge in sales of twenty thousand to sixtythousand and Secam’s sales reach a summit in 2008 of seventy thousand sales andfrom 2008 to 2010 there was a drop in sales of ten thousand. We remain at yourdisposal for further information.

We hope you will reply very soon.

Yours faithfully

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonsoir, quelqu'un pourrait t-il m'aider a corriger les fautes de ma lettre ? Merci beaucoup d'avance.

Dear Sir,

We are looking for a UK partner to develop our business in the united kingdom.