Correction D'un Devoir

[kassou01]

Bonsoir,

Je dois rédiger un cours texte pour présenter un auteur de psychologie. Quelqu'un pourrait t-il me corriger ? Mon anglais n'est pas excellent et je veux rendre quelque chose de "potable".

Merci à vous et bonne soirée.

" For the project we have to do, we chose to talk about Sigmund Freud. More particulary we will (attarder, je ne sais pas comment le traduire en anglais) on the way we approach him in Psychology. We will explain some of his theories which we study in first year of licence and the critics than we can do about them.

We think that it is interesting to present this author because very often when we question the students last year of high school and what we ask them for what he thinks of studying in Psychology, they quote us almost automatically the name of Freud ; He is an author, certainly controversial but known for all.

We will present our work by pressing us on the biography of Sigmund Freud, on some of his works, and of course, by helping us of what we studied in first year on this subject. "

[Adler]

To langer pour s'attarder il me semble.

Tu pourrais enlever ''very often'' et le placer plutôt ici : they quote very often the name of Freud (almost automatically c'est un peu lourd comme phrase)

Sinon pour la dernière phrase qui présente ton plan tu pourrais mettre : One the one hand,we will present a biography of Sigmund Freud,on some of his words and the other hand what we studied in first year on this subject.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonsoir,

Je dois rédiger un court texte pour présenter un auteur de psychologie. Quelqu'un pourrait t-il me corriger ? Mon anglais n'est pas excellent et je veux rendre quelque chose de "potable".

Merci à vous et bonne soirée.

" For the project we have to do, we chose to talk about Sigmund Freud. More particulary we will (attarder, je ne sais pas comment le traduire en anglais) linger over the way we approach him in psychology. We will explain some of his theories which we are studying in the first year of licence a degree in psychology and the criticisms than that we can do make about of them.

We think that it is interesting to present this author because, very often when we question the students last year's high school students and what we ask them for what he they think of studying in psychology, they very often quote us almost automatically the name of Freud almost automatically. He is an author certainly a controversial author but he is known for by all.

We will present our work by pressing us leaning on the biography of Sigmund Freud, on some of his works, and of course, by helping us making use of what we studied in first year on this subject during the first year. "