Fashion

[Marabou]

Bonjour, je suis de retour ! J'ai fait un nouveau sujet blanc et j'aimerais savoir si vous pouviez me corriger l'expression écrite, mais je crois que j'ai essayé encore une fois de faire quelque chose de trop complexe !

This audio recording is called the secret life of a teenager. It discusses the importance of representation and image that the individual gives to him and especially the fad among youth. This document refers to both stress among young people that social pressure on them. To do the voice-over, presumably a reporter interviewed a number of young people to give their opinion on this phenomenon. There are five: Alexander, Chris Thomas, Lauren and Diana and live throughout the United States: Los Angeles, Texas, Arkansas or New Jersey.

Alexander stresses the role of social representation, the will to please in society and give a good self-image. Chris when his part, emphasizes the role of media and especially television, which sets standards in terms of aesthetics. Lauren explains to her that when it is a kind of freedom that allows even resembling a stereotype coming off the parents and finally Diana explains the various tribes to which young people can identify.

For my part, I will remind that fashion is not a recent phenomenon that has always existed, and that man to give up as the need for desire. It should also reminds that fashion is for teenager an identification process and therefore need to become an adult. From my point of view, image and social representation took place everywhere, and particularly among the middle classes who have access to the same services need to distinguish. But the media did not create this phenomenon see mode standardization but amplify this last one! I think we must assume our personality and individuality, but always keep an objective view so as not to be slaves of appearance society!

Merci d'avance pour vos corrections !

Marabou !

[Jean B]

Hello,

Bonjour, je suis de retour ! J'ai fait un nouveau sujet blanc et j'aimerais savoir si vous pouviez me corriger l'expression écrite, mais je crois que j'ai essayé encore une fois de faire quelque chose de trop complexe !

[Marabou]

Bonsoir ! Me revoilà un peu tardivement mais pause vacances oblige ! Alors voici ma correction du texte avec des arrangements je l'espère plus convaincants ( Pas dit ! ):

This audio recording is called the secret life of a teenager. It deals with the importance of representation and image that the individual gives himself and especially fashion among youths. This document refers to both stress and social pressure on young people. To do the voice-over, presumably a reporter interviewed a number of young people to give their opinion on this phenomenon. There are five people: Alexander, Chris Thomas, Lauren and Diana and they live throughout the United States: Los Angeles, Texas, Arkansas or New Jersey.

Alexander stresses the role of social representation, the will to please in society and give a good self-image. Chris, for his part, emphasizes the role of media and especially television, which sets standards in terms of aesthetics. Lauren explains to her that fashion is a kind of freedom for him. Leaves to look like a stereotype, this choice allows him to detach himself from his parents. And and finally Diana explains the various tribes to which young people can identify with.

For my part, I will remind that fashion is not a recent phenomenon, it has always existed, and that man abandoned the need to satisfy desires. It should also be reminded that fashion is for a teenager an identification process and therefore a need to become an adult. From my point of view, image and social representation took place everywhere, and particularly among the middle classes who have access to the same services, fashion allows them to stand! But the media did not create this phenomenon of mode standardization but amplify this last one!

I think we must assume our personality and individuality, but always keep an objective view so as not to be slaves of Seeming society !

Merci d'avance de m'aider à corriger mes erreurs !

Marabou

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Bonsoir ! Me revoilà un peu tardivement mais pause vacances oblige ! Alors voici ma correction du texte avec des arrangements je l'espère plus convaincants ( Pas dit ! ):

This audio recording is called the secret life of a teenager. It deals with the importance of representation and image that the individual gives himself and especially fashion among youths. This document refers to both stress and social pressure on young people. To do the voice-over, presumably a reporter presumably interviewed a number of young people to give their opinion on this phenomenon. There are five people: Alexander, Chris Thomas, Lauren and Diana and they live throughout the United States: Los Angeles, Texas, Arkansas or New Jersey.

Alexander stresses the role of social representation, the will to please in society and give a good self-image. Chris, for his part, emphasizes the role of media and especially television, which sets standards in terms of aesthetics. Lauren explains to her that fashion is a kind of freedom for him. Leaves ??? to look like a stereotype, this choice allows him to detach himself from his parents.

[Marabou]

Bonjour, merci pour toutes ces corrections, par la phrase: "Leaves to look like a stereotype, this choice allows him to detach himself from his parents." je voulais par "leaves" dire, quitte à ressembler à un stéréotype, tant qu'a ressembler à un stéréotype ... Il me semblait qu'on utilisait "Leaves" par rapport à une phrase que j'avais lu dans un livre en anglais ! Puis-je utliser "even if" ici ?

En vous remerçiant d'avance.

Marabou !

[Jean B]

Bonjour, merci pour toutes ces corrections. Par la phrase : "Leaves to look like a stereotype, this choice allows him to detach himself from his parents." je voulais par "leaves" dire, quitte à ressembler à un stéréotype, tant qu'a ressembler à un stéréotype ... Il me semblait qu'on utilisait "Leaves" par rapport à une phrase que j'avais lue dans un livre en anglais !