Correction

[Marabou]

Bonjour, c'est encore moi, pourriez vous m'aider à corriger mes erreurs dans ce texte que j'ai rédigé ! :

It is true that Beverley Naidoo writes for an intended audience of young readers. We see it clearly in all her publications, but also on the first sight to the cover of "The Other Side of Truth" where it can be noted that this book won a literary award for young people: the Carnegie Medal. But try to see that she tries to move these young players with a strong family history and more specifically through the twenty-ninth chapter!

This complicated family history, specifically in this chapter is divided into three main phases.

First, we observe the children's attention as they try to occupy their minds while playing but they are always invaded by grief. They imagine their father in prison, suffering from his condition of life and they feel almost guilty to be free. Just before the meeting, the time seems very long for the children, Chade tries to move faster the clock hands and both brother as sister moan because of traffic congestions on the road! Finally, children with their eyes, they are very impress by the prison and are terrified of the place. It is therefore clear that the young public can identify with this feeling of lack of the father.

The second step in this chapter is the meeting with their father in the visiting room. At the sight of him, they jumped into his arms and tears of happiness. There are intrigued by the change in appearance of their father to remain discreet. They share memories and are happy to chat. The scene moves the young audience as it evokes the powerful link between them and their parents.

Finally, in the third Part, the author discusses the separation of children and father, it evokes strong feelings of separation and goodbyes are terrible father to his children. These intense emotions greatly affects children.

In conclusion, we can say that this book and especially this chapter are adapted to young audiences because it deals with a complicated but intense family situation .

Merci d'avance de votre aide !

Marabou !

[Jean B]

Bonjour et, s'il te plaît, fais preuve d'un minimum de patience, if you see what I'm hinting at. Personne ici n'est aux ordres, moi y compris.

Bonjour, c'est encore moi, pourriez vous m'aider à corriger mes erreurs dans ce texte que j'ai rédigé ! :

It is true that Beverley Naidoo writes for an intended audience of young readers. We see it clearly in all her publications, but also on from the first sight to look at the cover of "The Other Side of Truth" where it can be noted that this book won a literary award for young people: the Carnegie Medal. But try to see that she tries to move these young players with a strong family history and more specifically through the twenty-ninth chapter!

This complicated family history, specifically in this chapter, is divided into three main phases.

First, we observe the children's attention as they try to occupy their minds while playing but they are always invaded by grief. They imagine their father in prison, suffering from his condition of life and they feel almost guilty to be free. Just before the meeting, the time seems very long for the children, Chade tries to move faster the clock hands and both brother as and sister moan because of traffic congestions on the road! Finally, children with their eyes, they are very impressed by the prison and are terrified of the place. It is therefore clear that the young public can identify with this feeling of lack of the father.

The second step in this chapter is the meeting with their father in the visiting room. At the sight of him, they jumped into his arms and shed tears of happiness. There They are intrigued by the change in appearance of their father to remain discreet. They share memories and are happy to chat. The scene moves the young audience as it evokes the powerful link between them and their parents.

Finally, in the third part, the author discusses the separation of children and father, it evokes strong feelings of separation and goodbyes are terrible xx??xx father to his children.

[Marabou]

Veuillez m'excuser de mon impatience, mais je devais rendre rapidement ce travail , j'ai peaufiné les corrections et je vous remercie de votre aide et en aucun cas je n'exigerais une quelconque aide même si j'en serais ravi car le fait de donner un peu de votre temps m'aide vraiment !

Merci encore de votre aide.

Marabou !