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Bonjour,

C'est pour une correction. J'espère que vous me corrigerez. Merci.

One once a time, Mr chocolat

Name:Chocolat

Surname:Capricious

Heigh:25cm

Weigh:1k

Like:Himself

Hobbies:Do nothing everyday

Character:Jealous of Strawberry, and passionate of the humain's stomatches

A solution for you problem ?

Hear well this story, because she is maybe your !

Formely, Chocolate born in the world planete under differents formes but just one goal:

Help persons, whatever the situation.At a low price, but at quality impressive, he is your toll, your indulgence in your life

Tax to pay? Dispute of couple? Resignation? It is here for help you .

A little square , and there you go.Yes girls, of course we know it well, a broke up with our boyfriend and we became very sad, very angry, one bar of our hero and we find again moral.Mum, dad, grandmother, grandfather, tax to pay but not monney to pay it? The moral must be to zero! take chocolate and you will find it well .Sweet, tender,delicious and tempting , it melt in our mouth and caress our minds as our teddy bear of childhood.Cute and Soft, it didn't exist just in the gustitive's world but also in industrial It allow us to speak with our nears, in change of phone:well obviously, the LG chocolate

.Misses you fell fat or a lot of thin, engulf to chocolat,and you will find your outline of dream!

Misters , the rate of jobless increase, the job become mediocre ,take one break one moment of tentation with mr chocolat , does not hurt!

Children cry dear mum and dad , their cry must be just one desire.Why not Mr chocolat? offer them and they will smile .

Mr chocolate, Try it , and your life will change

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Bonjour,

Bonjour,

C'est pour une correction. J'espère que vous me corrigerez. Merci.

One Once upon a time there was a Mr Chocolate

Name:Chocolate

Surname:Capricious

Height:25cm

Weight:1k

Like:Himself

Hobbies:Do nothing everyday

Character:Jealous of Strawberry, and passionate of the loves/has a passion for/ humans' stomachs

A solution for you problem?

Hear well Listen carefully to this story, because she is it may be yours!

Formely, Chocolate was born in the world on planet Earth under differents formes shapes but just one goal:

Help people/persons, whatever the situation. At a low price, but at an impressive quality impressive, he is your toll, your indulgence in your life.

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