Raconter Ses Vacances.

[Lily009]

Bonsoir, (et bonne année =)

J'ai un texte à rendre pour Lundi, aux environs de 150mots, je n'ai eu que la consigne d'utiliser : Like et Dislike "Si possible".

J'aimerais avoir un avis sur le texte que je vais présenter en vous remerciant d'avance de prendre le temps de le lire.

" I passed my holiday at my home. During my winter Holiday, I went to my Grand parent’s house, and I saw my aunt, Remy, my cousin. He has got 6 years old, I saw also his little sister Lucy, my cousin too she was born two months ago. They live so far, and come to saw us, only sometimes in a year. I could saw my family I was happy.

Louise invites me at her home, there were too Jutine, Geoffrey and Camille, We went to the cinema Watch Narnia : It was Fantastic ! There were Actions, Funs and special effects, I don’t like this type of movies, but this one is Super ! After that, we took some pictures in her garden.

Thibault, came at home, I he shows my village, Shown the waterfall, the biggest places. With him, I played on the computer,

For Christmas, I had a black Laptop, Music Albums, and some others things. Yesterday, Justine and me, had sleep at Louise’s house, for the New Year, We were dancing all night long.I loved my Holiday, because, I could saw my family and my friends,It was really, funny.I’m Keen on snow, but, during this Holiday, there weren’t have any snow !

I am Desappointed…."

Voilà, merci