Correction Discours Indirect Direct

[dellina]

Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger ce que j'ai fait , je dois transformer ce discours indirect en discours direct

Brenda told Doctor Gillian that she had really tried hard.She said she had done a lot of sport.She swore that she had been very careful with her food.She had listened to her doctor's advice and she had avoided cakes.She had been positive.She had made an effort.She asked the doctor to look at her:she was tired,depressed and she said she had lost only one pound.Doctor Gillian agreed but he asked her if she had tried their SUPERSLIM tablets.He assured her it was a new formula and that it worked wonders.Brenda said she had not tried but she promised she would.She exclaimed that she was feeling better already.She thanked the doctor.

Brenda:"I have really tried hard.I have done a lot of sport .I have been very careful wither my food.I have listened to you doctor.I have avoided cakes.I have been postive.I have made an effort.Can you look at me? I'm tired, depressed,and I have lost only one pound."

Doctor Gillian:I'm agree but Have you try the superslim tablets?, I assure you it's a new formula and that it work wonders.

Brenda:"I have not tried but I promise you I would .I'm feeling better already.Thank you doctor

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger ce que j'ai fait , je dois transformer ce discours indirect en discours direct

Brenda told Doctor Gillian that she had really tried hard. She said she had done a lot of sport. She swore that she had been very careful with her food. She had listened to her doctor's advice and she had avoided cakes. She had been positive. She had made an effort. She asked the doctor to look at her:she was tired,depressed and she said she had lost only one pound. Doctor Gillian agreed but he asked her if she had tried their SUPERSLIM tablets. He assured her it was a new formula and that it worked wonders. Brenda said she had not tried but she promised she would. She exclaimed that she was feeling better already. She thanked the doctor.

Brenda: "I have really tried hard.I have done a lot of sport. I have been very careful with my food. I have listened to you, doctor. I have avoided cakes. I have been postive. I have made an effort. Can you look at me? I'm tired, depressed and I have lost only one pound."

Doctor Gillian: I agree but have you try tried the superslim tablets? I assure you it's a new formula and that it works wonders.

Brenda: "I have not tried but I promise you I would will. I'm feeling better already. Thank you doctor.

[dellina]

oui mais il est mal fait non? c'est pas comme ça la forme direct

[Jean B]

oui mais il est mal fait non? c'est pas comme ça la forme direct

[yveslouis]

Oui, mais il est mal fait non? C'est pas comme ça la forme directe.

[Jean B]

Ah ben, grand merci pour ton soutien, collègue !

À force, je finirais par douter de tout ...!

[dellina]

Thanks! I trust you, it's the same for JRB.

Non JRB, j'ai confiance en toi. Tu es le meilleur en anglais, tu le sais ! Merci beaucoup pour la correction.

[Jean B]

Thanks! I trust you, it's the same for JRB.

Non JRB, j'ai confiance en toi. Tu es le meilleur en anglais, tu le sais !

[dellina]

Merci !et bonne soirée