Help Me

[Cheulie]

Voila je dois écrire une lettre afin d'intégrer un "gap year". Je ne suis pas sure de mon agnalis donc si vous pouvez me dire ce que ça donne merci beaucoup !

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Nicole, and I am 22 years old. I am living in Edinburgh. I am in my second years veterinary science in Royal (Dick) School of Veterinary Studies. I like to travel in the world so as to discover the other culture. I had already gone in South Africa and more in Europe, I like to cook and to practice sport too/ playing sport.

When I was little girl, I grew up in a country side because my parents had a farm. I was ever with animal. I learnt help them. Therefore, I knew that I wanted to become vet. Before, when I was 12 years old, I walked dogs in my neighborhood, every Saturday morning. I went often in zoo to see the animals. I like that and I want to understand them. I really want to know how they are, if they are sad/sick, if they need something. Then, during my studies I have done the internship. Two trainings periods. I did my first internship at a zoo and my second a vet. Having spent my undergraduate degree, I decided to undertake studies in veterinary science. I managed to integrate the Royal (Dick) School of Veterinary Studies. I really enjoyed school. Now I have acquired some knowledge, I wish I could put into practice what you taught me during those two years.

During periods where I worked with animals and professionals, I always knew accepting comments. Mostly I was criticized for being very emotional. It is true that nothing can move me. I was also told that I was sometimes too obstinate by my ideas when I think to be right. But I was also told that I was very attentive to the animals and also with others when they explain to me how I could do better. I am also working with a team. I like to discuss with the rest of the team. However I can not stand that one takes me high.

Thanks to African Conservation Experience, I have over felines because I have not had a chance to look into it. I would also like to acquire a new experience thanks to them. Thanks to the action that I could carry in southern Africa I would like to improve the living conditions of animals. It would, I think, beneficial to know the world the work we do. It could reduce the extermination of species extinction see.

On my return to Edinburgh, I would open my veterinarian's office. I also can realize various expeditions like the one you propose. I would look also to know these trips to other people. Destinations that are intended to help those in need. Furthermore I find these trips extremely rewarding, not only for my professional experience. I am sure they also are beneficial for society. Subsequently, I would organize trips with young vets who want to learn more.

Thank you for having read my query and I hope a positive response from you.

Yours sincerely.

[Cheulie]

VOILA J'AI ESSAYE DE CORRIGER QUELQUE FAUTES MERCI !

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Nicole, and I am 22 years old. I am living in Edinburgh. I am in my second years veterinary science in Royal (Dick) School of Veterinary Studies. I like to traveling in the world so as to discover the other culture. I had already been in South Africa and more in Europe, I like to cooking and to practicing sport too

When I was little girl, I grew up in a country side because my parents had a farm. I was always with animal. I learnt help them. Therefore, I knew that I wanted to become vet . Afterwards, when I was 12 years old, I walked dogs in my neighborhood, every Saturday morning. I often went in zoo to see the animals. I like that and I want to understand them. I really want to know how they are, if they are sick, if they need something. Then, during my studies I have done the internships. I did my first internship at a zoo and my second a vet. Having spent my undergraduate degree, I decided to undertake studies in veterinary science. I managed to integrate the Royal (Dick) School of Veterinary Studies. I really enjoyed school. Now I have acquired some knowledge, I wish put into practice what you taught me during those two years.

During periods where I worked with animals and professionals, I always knew accepting comments. Mostly I was criticized for being very emotional. It is true that nothing can move me. I was also told that I was sometimes too obstinate by my ideas when I think to be right. But I was also told that I was very attentive to the animals and also with others when they explain to me how I could do better. I am also working with a team. I like to discuss with the rest of the team. However I can not stand that one takes me high.

Thanks to African Conservation Experience, I would like to work with big cats because I have not had a chance to look into them. I would also like to acquire a new experience thanks to them. Thanks to the action that I could carry in southern Africa I would like to improve the living conditions of animals. It would, I think, beneficial to do so as to know to the world the work we do. It could reduce the extermination of extinction species.

On my return to Edinburgh, I would open my veterinarian's office. I also want to realize various expeditions like the one you propose. I also want to know these trips to other people. Destinations that are intended to help those in need. Furthermore I think these trips extremely rewarding, not only for my professional experience. I am sure they also are beneficial for society. Subsequently, I would organize trips with young vets who want to learn more.

Thank you for having read my query and I hope a positive response from you.

Yours sincerely.

[Jean B]

VOILA J'AI ESSAYE DE CORRIGER QUELQUE FAUTES MERCI !

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Nicole, and I am 22 years old. I am living in Edinburgh. I am in my a second year student of veterinary science in at the Royal (Dick) School of Veterinary Studies. I like to traveling in the world so as to discover the other cultures. I had already been in South Africa and more in Europe, I like to cooking and (to) practicing do sport too.

[Cheulie]

It is true that nothing can move me. C'est pas faux ! comme on pourrait dire qu'un rien m'émue ?

et concernant le to practing ... traveling ... On me l'as dit donc connaissant la personne qui est relativement doué en anglais je lui est fait confiance.

[Jean B]

It is true that nothing can move me. C'est pas faux ! comme on pourrait dire qu'un rien m'émue émeut ?

[Cheulie]

Ok ! Merci je vais mettre ça sur post-it ^^