Dialogue Anglais

[Méélanie.]

Bonjour,

Sujet du devoir : Créer un dialogue pour ensuite passer à l'oral en équipe. Thème : Vous devez montrer deux points de vues opposés de la problématique : Est-ce que on devrait publier la vie privée des célébrités .

Donc voilà le dialogue que j'ai écrit. J'aimerais qu'on corrige mes fautes (surement nombreuses désolé) & peut-être me donner des conseils pour améliorer le dialogue & également vos idées pour que le présentateur ait plus de répliques .. et que

le texte contiennent plus de vocabulaire .

Merci d'avance de votre aide . Voici le dialogue :

Anchorman : Goodmorning and welcome to the Pile ou Face show ! Our topic of the day is : Should jurnalists publish the private life of celebrities ? To answer to this question,

please welcome 2 journalists who seems to have 2 different points: Mary Poppy , who is famous for her bad critizims and Candy Dally, famous redactrice of the magazine PEOPLE

.So, Miss Candy , what do you think about publishing private life ?

Candy Daly : I think we can know more about someone throught her intimity. Indeed, how can we talk about someone that we don't know ? It's just impossible.

It's necessary to enter in their private life to make credibles articles.

So publishing private life of celebrities is essential ! Working on a magazine , I know that it's this kind of scoops that interest people and this

is the reason why they buy it

Anchorman : Ok , good point ! I agree that my daughters love knowing everything about their favorite celebrity. They actually

buy the magazine PEOPLE every week to see new articles ! And , I agree , that I sometimes take a look in it too ! But , I'm not saying that Candy Daly is right

with the fact that it's essential ! I don't have an oppinion so maybe Miss Mary wants to say something ?

Mary Poppy : Sure ! That's why I am here , to defend my point of vue ! So , I don't agree with miss Candy !

I don't understant what can be so important in the celbrities life ? Who cares about what Britney does to her hair ? I don't !! There are so many important things

in the world like war for exemple !! Sorry , but I am more interested in war and what happens there instead of the rich celebrities who care just about money , fashion and

how to make scandals !

Candy Daly : Tell me Miss Mary Poppy , how many magazines did you sell with your pathetic " War & Actuality " ? .. Let me guess .. A hundred news-paper ?

Mary Poppy : No actually , it was a lot , lot more than that !

Candy Daly : But not as much as MY magazine !

Mary Poppy : You care just about money ! That is your goal , make money !

Candy Daly : And what is important for you ?

Mary Poppy : To show to people reality !! Important things that happens in life !

Candy Daly : When Britney cuted her hair, it was the reality and very important !

Mary Poppy : Important ? NO ! Reality , ok maybe but WHO CARES ? Maybe little teenagers or I don't know! But grown-people and serious people , will think like me ! And maybe some things that you publish are the reality

but don't tell me magazines doesn't make fals articles just to make a SCOOP ! To make your article more interesting ! I publish REAL things ! I don't try to make

it more shoking that they are !

Candy Daly : MOst People are not interested in war ! They are interested in celebrities , in scandals ! That's what they like to read ! And we just give them what

they like !

Mary Poppy : Maybe if there wasn't any Gossip Magazines , then people would be more interested in Important things !

Candy Daly : But it doesn't go that way!

Mary Poppy : And it's a shame ! Did you think at them ? Do you think that celebrities like to see their friday night on internet and on the 1rst page of a magazine ?

I don't think so ! It's their life ! So leave them alone and try to write about important things !

Candy Daly : Oh yeah ! Celebrities often make scandals to appear in a famous magazine , or on internet ! They want people to talk about them ! That's how they make

themselves more famous ! Even if people talk in a bad way about them ! And, When they choose to be celbrities , the already know that they will be spied by the paparazzies all the

time ! So, if someone doesn't want this kind of life , then Why become famous ?

Mary Poppy : I think that most of them doesn't imagined how it will be when they become famous , and now , it's too late , and I think they just hope that paparazzies

will find another target more interesting then them , so they can continue their life without apparing every day in magazines !

Anchorman : Wow , We have a good debate today on our reality TV show ! Two points really well defended and it's really hard for me to give reason (?) at one of these two

great journalits ! So now , lets ask our public what they think about this ? Do you think like Miss Candy and defend the point that gossip magazines should publish the private life of Celbrities

Or you defend Mary's point of vue and think that we shouldn't publish it ?

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour,

Sujet du devoir : Créer un dialogue pour ensuite passer à l'oral en équipe. Thème : Vous devez montrer deux points de vues opposés de la problématique : Est-ce que on devrait publier la vie privée des célébrités .

Donc voilà le dialogue que j'ai écrit. J'aimerais qu'on corrige mes fautes (surement nombreuses désolé) & peut-être me donner des conseils pour améliorer le dialogue & également vos idées pour que le présentateur ait plus de répliques .. et que le texte contiennent<le sujet est singulier plus de vocabulaire.

Merci d'avance de votre aide. Voici le dialogue :

Anchorman : Good morning and welcome to the Pile ou Face Heads or Tails show ! Our topic of the day is : Should journalists publish the private life of celebrities? To answer to this question, please welcome 2 journalists who seems<Le sujet est pluriel, non ? to have 2 different points: Mary Poppy, who is famous for her bad criticisms and Candy Dally, famous redactrice<??<N'as-tu pas un dictionnaire ? of the magazine PEOPLE. So, Miss Candy, what do you think about publishing private life?

Candy Daly : I think we can know more about someone through her their intimity intimacy.

[Méélanie.]

Merci beaucoup pour la correction !! Vous m'avez énormément aidé.

Je pense que j'aurais pu éviter de nombreuses fautes en me relisant mieux...

[Jean B]

Merci beaucoup pour la correction !! Vous m'avez énormément aidé.