Travail D'anglais T Sti

[Adel93]

Bonjour ,

je doit faire la suite d'un travail en anglais ( un texte ) qui parlais d'un jeune homme arrêtant l'école alors qu'il avait un bon niveau pour devenir pécheur alors que ces professeur et sa famille l'en dissuade .

Voila ce que j'ai écrit quelqu'un pourrait me corriger svp pour les fautes d'orthographe et autre svp .

After this discusion I go to the park for stay on the chaire and think to my futur and why I make this decision . After have think to this decision , now I'm agree with my teacher it was a waste of time and I was be sorry for my teacher and I'm upset for not having done what his teacher wanted .But now I'm a lobesterman and I'm happy , it's a principal for me , and i will be a first lobesterman educated . The ball of the young boy arrived on my foot , and the young boy said : " Sorry Mr I could take my ball " , I said : " Yes of curse " , the young boy said : " Think Mr and what are you donig in your life ? " , I said : "Now I'm sur , I'm a lobesterman " the young boy said : " Why you are a lobesterman ? " I said : " Because the principal is to make this we love " The Mother's of the young boy come and said : " Come on Bradley stop talk with his Mr you bothered ".

[Maxzi]

Bonjour,

Bonjour ,

je doit faire la suite d'un travail en anglais ( un texte ) qui parlais d'un jeune homme arrêtant l'école alors qu'il avait un bon niveau pour devenir pécheur alors que ces professeur et sa famille l'en dissuade .

Voila ce que j'ai écrit quelqu'un pourrait me corriger svp pour les fautes d'orthographe et autre svp .

After this discusion discussion I go went to the park for to stay on the chaire (si tu veux dire "chaise", c'est chair) and think to my futur future and why I make made this decision . After have think After thinking to this decision , now I'm agree être d'accord = to agree with my teacher it was a waste of time and I was be sorry être désolé = to be/to feel sorry for my teacher and I'm upset for not having done what his my teacher wanted .But now I'm a lobesterman lobsterman and I'm happy , it's a principal for me , and i I will be a the first lobesterman educated . The ball of the young boy arrived on my foot , and the young boy said : " Sorry Mr I could take my ball could I take my ball?" , I said : " Yes of curse course" , the young boy said : " Think Mr and what are you donig doing in your life ? " , I said : "Now I'm sur sure, I'm a lobesterman " the young boy said : " Why you are a lobesterman ? Why are you a lobsterman?" I said : " Because the principal thing is to make this what we love " The Mother's of the young boy come came and said : " Come on Bradley stop talk talking with his this Mr you bothered ".

Il y a beaucoup de fautes "basiques". Revois ta grammaire et utilise mieux ton dictionnaire.

[Adel93]

Merci beaucoup pour ton aide !

Je te remercie infiniment

[Maxzi]

Mais de rien.