Exercice D'anglais

[Muyriamm]

Message fusionné

[Jean B]

Edit modération : messages fusionnés.

Posté Aujourd'hui, 10:52 Bonjour ,

J'ai une histoire à raconter, en fait une suite à faire que je devrai ensuite apprendre par coeur.

La consigne : Make an oral presentation on one of these topics :

Et j'ai choisi : Why family is more important than friends.

(Si vous voulez les autres sujets demandez-les moi, si vous avez une idée .)

Je n'y arrive pas. Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider SVP ?

Au moins la personne commence et je continue SVP.

Thanks.

Sur quelque forum que tu ailles, tu obtiendras partout la même réponse : personne ne fera jamais TON travail à TA place parce que ce serait te rendre un très mauvais service.

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Bonjour,

Il est inutile de multiplier les messages, encore plus de relancer par message privé.

N'oublie surtout pas que toutes les personnes qui interviennent sur le forum, moi y compris, sont entièrement bénévoles, ont une vie personnelle et ne passent pas forcément tout leur temps devant l'écran de leur ordinateur, particulièrement le dimanche.

SVP aidez-moi. J'ai deja commencé. Est-ce que vous pouvez me corriger ?

Unless you have a true friend, one who has been there with you for years and years, nothing can replace your family. While it is true that not all families are the same by giving support and being understanding no matter what, in the end as they say, friends come and go while your family will always be your family, no matter what. Even if you argue and never speak to each other for the rest of your life, you cannot change that fact.

I think our family is more important than friends because our family more know more about us , especially our problems.

In addition, we live together with our family longer than with friends, no wonder we can share all our problems we can share with our family.

Finally, I believe that family is more important than friends because family were there for you when your mom gave birth and your friends were not! Family are the ones who cared for you and your mom and dad are a part of your family and they gave birth to you and if it were not for them then you would not even be alive right now.

[Muyriamm]

Merci , mais est ce que sava comme petite redaction sur " Why family is more important than friends. "

[Jean B]

Merci, mais est-ce que ça va comme petite rédaction sur " Why family is more important than friends. "

[Muyriamm]

Non mais au contraire j'écris bien d'habitude , même très bien mais sauf que je suis sur l'ordinateur c'est pour cela que j'écris comme sa , j'écris vite , c'est pour ça .

Cordialement .

[Jean B]

Non mais au contraire j'écris bien d'habitude, même très bien mais sauf que je suis sur l'ordinateur c'est pour cela que j'écris comme ça, j'écris vite, c'est pour ça.

Cordialement.

[Muyriamm]

D'accord , si vous le dite .

Mais veuillez m'excuser mais vous m'aviez dit que la phrase suivante faisait rire :

Finally, I believe that family is more important than friends because family were there for you when your mom gave birth and your friends were not!

Comment doit je la changer ?

[Muyriamm]

Non ce n'est pas vous qui me la dit mais je crois que cette phrase est bizarre ( un peu drôle ) , comment pourrai je la modifier ( par quoi ? )

[Boltzmann_Solver]

D'accord , si vous le dite .

Mais veuillez m'excuser mais vous m'aviez dit que la phrase suivante faisait rire :

Finally, I believe that family is more important than friends because family were there for you when your mom gave birth and your friends were not!

Comment doit je la changer ?

[Jean B]

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Finally, I believe that family is more important than friends because family were there for you when your mom gave birth and your friends were not![...]

Bonsoir myriam et JRB,

Cette phrase est marrante car elle laisse entendre que tous tes amis ont au mois 10 ans de plus que toi. Je t'explique pourquoi.

Ma traduction supposée de cette phrase est : "Finalement, je crois que (la) famille est plus important que les amis parce qu'ils étaient là quand votre mère vous donna la vie et vos amis non.".

En dehors de la construction trop compliquée (Je doute que ce soit bien anglais tout ça, mais il vaut mieux demander aux experts), tes amis n'ont aucune chance d'être importants à tes yeux car à moins que tes amis soient vraiment plus vieux que toi. A contrario, si tu as des amis de famille qui assistent à ta naissance, seront-ils importants ? En clair, l'argument en lui-même est limite .

Voila mon avis, mais il vaut mieux attendre la réponse de l'intéressé.

Bonne soirée.

[Muyriamm]

Bonjour , j'ai fait des modifications pourriez vous regardez si c'est bon :

Unless you have a true friend, one who has been there with you for years and years, nothing can replace your family. While it is true that not all families are the same by in giving support and being understanding no matter what you think, in the end as they say, friends come and go while your family will always be your family, no matter what they do . Even if you argue and never speak to each other for the rest of your life, you cannot change that fact.

I think family is more important than friends because our family know more about us especially our problems.in addition,we live together with our family longer than friends no wonder all our problems we can share with our family.

Finally , I believe that family is more important than friends because family are the ones who cared for you ,

and your mom and dad are a part of your family and they gave birth to you and if it were not for them then you would not even be alive right now .

[Boltzmann_Solver]

[...]

Finally, I believe that family is more important than friends because family were there for you when your mom gave birth and your friends were not![...]

Bonsoir myriam et JRB,

Cette phrase est marrante car elle laisse entendre que tous tes amis ont au mois 10 ans de plus que toi. Je t'explique pourquoi.

Ma traduction supposée de cette phrase est : "Finalement, je crois que (la) famille est plus important que les amis parce qu'ils étaient là quand votre mère vous donna la vie et vos amis non.".

En dehors de la construction trop compliquée (Je doute que ce soit bien anglais tout ça, mais il vaut mieux demander aux experts), tes amis n'ont aucune chance d'être importants à tes yeux car à moins que tes amis soient vraiment plus vieux que toi. A contrario, si tu as des amis de famille qui assistent à ta naissance, seront-ils importants ? En clair, l'argument en lui-même est limite .

Voila mon avis, mais il vaut mieux attendre la réponse de l'intéressé.

Bonne soirée.

[Muyriamm]

j'ai fait des modifications pourriez vous regardez si c'est bon :

Unless you have a true friend, one who has been there with you for years and years, nothing can replace your family. While it is true that not all families are the same by in giving support and being understanding no matter what you think, in the end as they say, friends come and go while your family will always be your family, no matter what they do . Even if you argue and never speak to each other for the rest of your life, you cannot change that fact.

I think family is more important than friends because our family know more about us especially our problems.in addition,we live together with our family longer than friends no wonder all our problems we can share with our family.

Finally , I believe that family is more important than friends because family are the ones who cared for you ,

and your mom and dad are a part of your family and they gave birth to you and if it were not for them then you would not even be alive right now .

[Jean B]

J'ai fait des modifications. Pourriez-vous regardez si c'est bon ?

Unless you have a true friend, one who has been there with you for years and years, nothing can replace your family. While it is true that not all families are the same by in giving support and being understanding no matter what you think, in the end as they say, friends come and go while your family will always be your family, no matter what they do. Even if you argue and never speak to each other for the rest of your life, you cannot change that fact.

I think family is more important than friends because our family know more about us, especially our problems. In addition, we live together with our family longer than with friends, no wonder all our the problems we can share with our family.

Finally, I believe that family is more important than friends because family are the ones who care for you, and your mom and dad are a part of your family and they gave birth to you and if it were not for them, then you would not even be alive right now.