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I would like to go with them because it’s one of the poorest country in the world, they didn’t have much water or electricity .

The second reason is because of children , they didn ‘t have many school in theirs villages , and they should have that to learn and to enriching their mind .

The reason is the care , they don’t have any care , and medicine and hospital , they become sick more easy of Aides or cancer and they let theirs children alone in the poverty , those children become orphan

I would to go with them because this country don’t have material thing for the agriculture, for the eductation, for the free time of children and don't have so much houses for all the people who live there

The last reason is about the food , they don't have enought food for everybody and a lot of die because of that , there is famine

I would like to go with them because it’s one of the poorest country in the world, they didn’t have much water or electricity .

The second reason is because of children , they didn ‘t have many school in theirs villages , and they should have that to learn and to enriching their mind .

The reason is the care , they don’t have any care , and medicine and hospital , they become sick more easy of Aides or cancer and they let theirs children alone in the poverty , those children become orphan

I would to go with them because this country don’t have material thing for the agriculture, for the eductation, for the free time of children and don't have so much houses for all the people who live there

The last reason is about the food , they don't have enought food for everybody and a lot of die because of that , there is famine

Bonjour ,peux t on me corriger mon devoir

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I should answer to this question : what are the reasons why you would like go with them " inhabitant of malawi"

Peux t-on me corriger mon texte svp ? et me dire si y'a des autre raisons

I would like to go with them because it’s one of the poorest country in the world, they didn’t have much water or electricity .

The second reason is because of children , they didn ‘t have many school in theirs villages , and they should have that to learn and to enriching their mind .

The reason is the care , they don’t have any care , and medicine and hospital , they become sick more easy of Aides or cancer and they let theirs children alone in the poverty , those children become orphan .

I would to go with them because this country don’t have material thing for the agriculture, for the eductation, for the free time of children and don't have so much houses for all the people who live there.

The last reason is about the food , they don't have enought food for everybody and a lot of die because of that , there is famine.

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Bonjour à tous

consigne : what are the reasons you want to go with them? Peux t on me corriger mon texte svp

Si y'a des autres raisons à lequelles vous pensez donner les moi merci

I would like to go with them because it's one of the poorest country in the world, they didn't have much water or electricity .

The second reason is because of children , they didn 't have many school in theirs villages , and they should have that to learn and to enriching their mind .

The reason is the care , they don't have any care , and medicine and hospital , they become sick more easy of Aides or cancer and they let theirs children alone in the poverty , those children become orphan

I would like to go with them because this country don't have material thing for the agriculture, for the eductation, for the free time of children and don't have so much houses for all the people who live there

The last reason is about the food , they don't have enought food for everybody and a lot of die because of that , there is famine

I would like to go with them to help develop the india tourism and help the people who live in difficult condition there

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