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[Audee]

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Even if the vision of the world of jonh was not understood of everybody, joohn stays a mytique figure of rock, on every December 8th, day of his death, of respects to take place. Meadows of 30 years after his death, he is considered as one of the most popular artists. For me, lennon john represents a true pacifist peace and love, a man for peace and in even the driver's licence ???j'espère qu'il continura a inspirer???the rock has tomorrow by remaining populaire in the world.

The chansson which I love is:

hello goodbye

hey jude

get back

and lady madonna.

[yveslouis]

Tout d'abort je vous remercie de votre correction.

Even if the vision of the world of jonh (orthographe + majuscule + cas possessif) was not understood [of] by everybody, joohn (majuscule + orthographe) [stays]remains a [mytique] mythical figure of rock, (commence une nouvelle phrase ici.) [on] every December 8th, day of his death, of respects to take place (je ne comprends pas) . Meadows (???) of 30 years after his death, he is considered as one of the most popular artists. For me, lennon john (majuscule + ordre des mots) represents a true pacifist peace and love (syntaxe) , a man for peace and in even the driver's licence (que vient faire le permis de conduire ici ?) ???j'espère qu'il continuera a inspirer??? [the] he'll go on inspiring rock [has] of (?) tomorrow by remaining populaire (mot français) in the world.

The chansson (???) which I love [is] are :

hello goodbye

hey jude

get back

and lady madonna.