Petite Correction : My Weekend

[Francky2]

Bonjour,

J'aurai besoin d'une petite correction de mon devoir d'anglais ainsi que pourquoi j'ai fait les fautes :

My Weekend

My weekend started on Friday, I leaved the school and I stay one hour in Hazebrouck with my friends for speak of movies, musics, girls … Then, I went at home to do homework and especially my English. When I had finish, I went eaten by some pastas. At 20:20, I leaved my home to play saxophone with my harmony. We played, we spook and when it was 23:15 I came back at home.

The following day, I woke up to 11 hours and going to eat and wash me. At noon, I ate an escalope of turkey with haricots. In the afternoon I went to the cinema with some friends to see 2012: the new wireless disaster.

We went out to film 16 hours and we talked for a moment the film: I agree with my friends, it is not the scenario of the year but when we know the filmography of Emmerich, it was necessary to expect a spectacular blockbuster which there are explosions and action during 2 hours even 3 hours, it is what I like. I liked the references to the old cultures Mayas, the action(share), the new developments in fact I liked the film from A to Z.

Already 18:00, I thus hurried to return at home to take my bag of judo and went to the Dojo. When the session of judo was finished, I was so tired that I went slept directly after a light meal and a small party of video game.

On Sundays I woke up at about 10 am, I lunched before finishing the homework. Just the time to do a part of video game that it is already the mealtime of family. It really lasted for such a long time before I can escape from table at about the 16 hours(4 pm) to make a small football with my little brother.

My weekend is already finished, the school wait me.

[Francky2]

Je remercie tout ceux qui ont pris le temps de me lire mais une sympathique personne vient de m'aider et voici ce que j'obitens :

My Weekend (titre original ^^ lol )

My weekend started on Friday, I leaved the school and I have been staying one hour in Hazebrouck with my friends to speak about movies, music, girls … Then, I went at home to do my homework and especially my English. When I finished , I ate some pastas. At 20:20, I leaved my home to play saxophone with my harmony. We played, we spook (?) and when it was 23:15, so I came back at home.

The next day, I woke up at 11 hours to eat and have a shower/a bath. For lunch, I ate an escalope of turkey with beans. In the afternoon I went to the cinema with some friends to see 2012: the new wireless disaster.

We came back at 16 hours and we talked for a moment about the film: I agreed with my friends, it is not the scenario of the year but when we know the filmography of Emmerich, it was necessary to expect a spectacular blockbuster which there are explosions and action during 2 hours even 3 hours, it is what I like. I liked the references to the old cultures Mayas, the action(share), the new developments in fact I liked the film from A to Z.(Cette expression est-elle bonne en Anglais relative au Français ? A vérifier.)

Already 18:00, I thus hurried to return at home to take my bag of judo and went to the Dojo. When the session of judo finished, I was so tired that I went sleeping directly after a light meal and a small party of video game.

On Sunday I woke up at about 10 am, I lunched before finishing my homework. Just the time to do a part of video game that it is already the mealtime of family. It really lasted for such a long time before I can escape from table at about 4 pm to make a small football party with my little brother.

My weekend was already finished, the school was waiting for me.

[Elydollz]

Salut alors je t'ai corrigé quelque fautes qu'il restait encore.

My Weekend (titre original ^^ lol )

My weekend started on Friday, I left (verbe irrégulier : to leave, left, left) school and I have been staying for one hour in Hazebrouck with my friends to speak about movies, music, girls … Then, I went (pas de "at") back home to do my homework and especially my English. When I finished , I ate some pastas. At 20:20, I left home to play saxophone with my harmony. We played, we spook (?) and when it was 23:15, so I came back home.

The next day, I woke up at 11 hours to eat and have a shower/a bath. For lunch, I ate an escalope of turkey with beans. In the afternoon, I went to the cinema with some friends to see 2012: the new wireless disaster.

We came back at 16 o'clock and we have talked for (avec "for" ou "since", on utilise le present perfect) a moment about the film: I agreed with my friends, it is not the script of the year but when we knew the filmography of Emmerich, it was necessary to expect a spectacular blockbuster since (puisque) there are explosions and action during 2 hours even 3 hours. It is what I like. I liked the references to the old cultures Maya, the action(share), the new developments, actually I liked the film from A to Z.(Cette expression est-elle bonne en Anglais relative au Français ? A vérifier = je pense que cette expression est bien.)

Already 18:00, I hurried to return at home to take my bag of judo and went to the Dojo. When the session of judo finished, I was so tired that I went sleeping directly after a light meal and a small party of video game.

On Sunday I woke up at about 10 am, I lunched before finishing my homework. Just the time to do a party of video game that it is already the family mealtime . It has really lasted for such a long time before I can escape from table at about 4 pm to make a small football party with my little brother.

My weekend was already finished, the school was waiting for me.