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[walid75010]

Bonjour, en anglais je dois parler d'un film ke j'ai adoré et dire pourquoi , pouvais vous me corrigez svp :

A very good film for me is "into the wild" by sean peen . this movie deals with a boy, christopher, who leave alls for go to the alaska lonely less money.its a tru story. The lanscapes are wonderful from start to end, we discover the beauty of nature , the story is good searched (bien cherché), affecting and the role corresponds good to the actor. this movie do much thought on our spending money useless because chistopher leaves less money, just with the nature. After watching this film, we have juste one desire : go to the aventure , at the end of world, lonely. i recommend this movie for all.

merci de me corriger en sachant que je n'ais pas fini car je doi faire 200 mot et je suis a 81 a peu pré ^^. merci de m'aider

[walid75010]

A very good film for me is "into the wild" by sean peen . this movie deals with a boy, christopher, who leave alls, his family, his money, his faculty for go to the alaska lonely in the nature . The lanscapes are wonderful from start to end, we discover the beauty of nature ,with the beautiful music, we can enter in each scene, and the story is good searched (bien cherché), affecting and the role corresponds good to the actor, he is ambitious, dreamer and naif. this movie do much thought on our spending money useless because chistopher leaves less money, just with the nature. We show that we can good live same outside the society. After watching this film, we have juste one desire : go to the aventure , at the end of world, lonely for live a single experience .this film is a true story what is most impressive. i recommend this movie for all.

2eme version un peu plus longue 100mot a peu prés, merci de m'aider

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

A very good film for me is "Into the Wild" by Sean Penn. This movie deals with a boy, Christopher, who leaves alls everything, his family, his money, his faculty college for to go to the Alaska lonely alone in the nature. The lanscapes are wonderful from start to end, we discover the beauty of nature, with the beautiful music, we can enter in each scene. The story is good searched well constructed. (bien cherché) and affecting moving. The role corresponds good well to the actor, he is ambitious, a dreamer and naïve.This movie do much thought on makes us think a great deal about our spending money uselessly because Chistopher leaves less can live without any money, just with the nature. We He shows that we can good live well same even outside the society. After watching this film, we have juste one desire: go off to the aventure aimlessly, at to the end of the world, lonely for to live a single unique experience in solitude. This film is a true story what which is most impressive. I recommend this movie for to all.

2eme version un peu plus longue 100mot a peu prés, merci de m'aider