Relecture Résumé Rapport De Stage En Anglais

[rom1n]

Bonsoir à tous! je suis nouveau sur le forum et j'ai besoin de votre aide!

j'ai rédigé un résumé de mon rapport de stage en anglais, je souhaiterais avoir votre avis. Donc si vous pouvez me relire pour corriger mes fautes cela m'aiderai énormément

Je met le fichier en pièce jointe.

Merci!

[rom1n]

je pense que la pièce jointe n'a pas été ajoutée. je met une copie de mon résumé:

Aspart of the Bachelor of Arts "Langues Etrangères Appliquées"(university language course with emphasis on business andmanagement), I was led to do an internship of two months to validatemy certificate.

I worked as a trainee at *****, I found thisinternship thanks to an advertisement published on Internet.

*****is a very small-sized company with a workforce of 9 persons andits legal status is simplified company with shares. The company islocated in Paris and is a marketing company specialized in thereferencing of industrial products. The aim is to connectprofessionals having specific needs with manufacturers who are ableto satisfy these needs. The company publishes a catalogue and has itsown web site.

Indeed, these last years the society developed itsactivities on the Internet, with its web site www.*****.com.

Duringthis training period, I held the post of " German internationaladvertising executive " within the service of internationaladvertising. My main tasks were:

To give information and toadvise the customers by the Internet or by telephone on the productsof the society, that is to say to explain its functioning, cataloguesand the web site

To canvass, develop and secure the loyalty of aclient portfolio of new prospective buyers on the German market. Overthe training period, I contacted by email more than 800 firms of theGerman industrial sector, so as to suggest them a partnership betweentheir firm and *****, to present their products on the web site:www.*****.com. The products presentation is free, but the firmpartner must pay a 21 Euros cost for each contact transmitted to themby ******.

To assure the after sales service regarding theproducts of the society. It was entrusted me in some case with themonitoring after sale, notably in litigations of the regulations ofbills between French and German customers.

To complete variousmissions and to reach the objectives, it was essential to put intopractice a significant number of knowledge gained in the course of mytraining at the university,%2

[rom1n]

voila la suite:

Tocomplete various missions and to reach the objectives, it wasessential to put into practice a significant number of knowledgegained in the course of my training at the university, namely:

-The common use of English and German (essential in internationaltrade, particularly in Europe)

• • the major notions of marketing and negotiation (which allowed me to understand the industry field of the society and to better organise contacts with my various interlocutors)
  • the bases of commercial communication.

The internship within ***** was not only personally (job performed in a multicultural environment) but also and mostly professionally enriching because it allowed me to increase my competences. Thanks to the missions realised independently, I could develop my sense of responsibility.

It also allowed me to gain a better organization in my job as well as a bigger telephone fluency, particularly in foreign languages.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

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