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[lucile123]

Pouvez-vous me corriger les fautes (syntaxe, ortho, etc..) SVP,

Citizen of the world is a big consumer of information. He wants to understand what is happening around him. Therefore, it becomes totally dependent on information. This is a good thing, but these citizens are poorly informed, with information standardized, uniform and of poor quality because of their demand for continuous and rapid. It's like fast food and eating poorly. For example, today the American newspaper USA Today was Macpaper-called because it distributes information that does not. Consequently, information has become a commodity. This is not yesterday that it accuses of things to the media. Already in the years 1920-1930, on the accusation that they are corrupt and lack of objectivity in the years 1960-1970. Today, the media face two big defined in the Internet and free newspapers.

Merci.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Pouvez-vous me corriger les fautes (syntaxe, ortho, etc..) SVP,

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Merci.

[lucile123]

Bonjour,

[Jean B]

répondre, au fait en français sa donne:

Par exemple, aujourd'hui le quotidien américain USA Today a été surnomé Macpaper car il diffuse une information qui ne satisfait pas. En conséquence, l'information est devenue une marchandise. Ce n'est pas d'hier que l'on reproche des choses à l'univers médiatique. Déjà dans les années 1920-1930, on la reprocher d'être corrompue puis de manque d'objectivité dans les années 1960-1970. Aujourd'hui, les médias doivent relever deux gros définis à savoir l'internet et les journaux gratuits.

Merci.