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Bonjour, je dois raconter une histoire misterieuse, je voudrais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait me corriger les fautes d'orthographe s'il vous plait:

Amytiville: The Demon's House.

Amityville house :

The house known as "devil's house" is located in the affluent neighborhoods of Amityville, 112 Ocean Avenue. It was built in 1928 on three floors in a pure colonial style. It is located in the small coastal town of Amityville, on Long Island, north of New York, USA.

The true story of Amityville

In a November night in 1974, Ronald DeFeo, 23, took his gun caliber. 35 and killed his father, mother, two brothers and two sisters while they were sleeping in their beds. What was strange was that Ronald claimed that it was the devil who made him kill his family, more precisely voices saying kill kill-all. After these facts, the house was for sale at only 80 000 dollars.The Lutz moved with their 3 children on 18 December 1975. One of their first actions was to ask a priest to come bless the house. During the blessing, the priest said strong a voice, seemingly coming from nowhere, said "Go you!

Now I am going to pass you pictures that was taken by a friend of the family home in Lutz after the massacre of Defeo, he certifies that the house was empty, this is really strange

"The devil's House"

George Lutz est tiré de son sommeil chaque nuit vers 3h15. Est -ce un cauchemar ou une réminiscence du massacre des DeFeo qui eut lieu à cette heure ? The family discovered variations OF temperature, the presence of the disgusting smell of old perfume, the formation of black spots and appearance of swarms of flies despite the winter season. A ceramic lion over 1 meter high begon to move alone. There were footprints forked hooves in the snow around the house. The Lutz arrived quickly to the conclusion that the house of their dreams was in fact a place haunted by nightmares of evil demons. Kathy Lutz is the first to be truly frightened by the entities who was haunted the house. Arms embraced the invisible; beings trying to have. Any leakage was impossible, Anson wrote, she felt she would die. Later, painful red marks appeared on her skin. At the same time, George Lutz was living in this strange turn of events. He heard a brass band parade in the house, with the sound of boots and the sound of wind instruments. He sees nothing but regained tables, chairs and the sofa pushed against the walls of the lounge. The Lutz said they were several times visited by demonic beings. They left the house on the fourteenth of January 1976, 28 days after their arrived.

Subsequent history of the house

Today and since the events several families have lived in the house in peace. Many of the phenomen described have found a simple explanation. Many people have doubts about the authenticity of the testimony of George Lutz and Katy, we say that George did not go very well, and shortly after a book and a little later a movie was filmed. Maybe did he need money ?

Transposition of the case in fiction

The Lutz became associated with the writer Jay Anson to tell their nightmare in a book that became a best-seller published under the original title of: The Amityville Horror - A True Story in 1977. Stuart Rosenberg drew inspiration from this history to make the film in 1979.