Correction D'un Devoir

[keira]

Bonjour je voudrai savoir si quelqu'un aurait la gentilesse de bien vouloir corriger mon devoir ayant pour sujet : Should parents interfere in their children private lives? Merci beaucoup.

For some parents interfere in their children private lives is important because a thing is essential: protect their children. It will be interesting to think to this problem. Sometimes it is necessary for teenagers.

First and foremost parents souldn't interfere in their children private lives because often children don't want their parents know they are in love. Moreover children prefer keep that secret because parents ask much questions, they all want to know. Sometimes they believe to do good deed when they give advice or when they give their opinion. It can be unbearable for some children. Sometimes these kind of situations can lead to family row.

We saw interfere in private lives of children can lead to argument but sometimes children seek comfort and advice and sometimes a protection.

In another hand it can be useful if parents interfere in their children private lives. Parents can advice their children. They can help them when there is a problem. They can comfort them when a love story is finished. Moreover they can bring their contribution to a situation when there is a conflict. Children can lean on their parents because they knpw they have their support. They don't feel alone.

To sum up parents often want to interfere into their children private lives but they should'nt act like that even if they love their offsprings. Children must do their own choice and they must learn of their errors.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour je voudrai savoir si quelqu'un aurait la gentilesse de bien vouloir corriger mon devoir ayant pour sujet : Should parents interfere in their children private lives? Merci beaucoup.

For some parents interfere in their children(0) private lives is important because a thing is essential: protect their children. It will be interesting to think to this problem. Sometimes it is necessary for teenagers.

First and foremost parents souldn't interfere in their children(0) private lives because often children don't want their parents (0) know they are in love. Moreover children prefer keep that secret because parents ask much questions, they all want to know. Sometimes they believe to do good deed when they give advice or when they give their opinion. It can be unbearable for some children. Sometimes these kinds of situations can lead to family row.

We saw interfere in private lives of children can lead to arguments but sometimes children seek comfort and advice and sometimes a protection.

In another hand it can be useful if parents interfere in their children(0) private lives. Parents can advise their children. They can help them when there is a problem. They can comfort them when a love story is finished. Moreover they can bring their contribution to a situation when there is a conflict. Children can lean on their parents because they knpw they have their support. They don't feel alone.

To sum up parents often want to interfere into their children(0) private lives but they should'nt act like that even if they love their offsprings. Children must do their own choice and they must learn of their errors.