Expression

[Djeust]

Bonjour,

Je viens de finir mon devoir, pouvez-vous y jeter un coup d'oeil et corriger les fautes?

Merci de votre aide!

Reality TV: for or against?

At the first, reality tv has been realised to an artistic aim, in the world of shows.

Today, reality Tv is very popular, many people like this.

In fact, this type of televison programme don't ask a huge capacity of reflection...41

People can sit in front of televison after a difficult journey, They want to rest and hanven't the need to think.

Besides, people have fun in front of escapades of actors, as if they would be able to take their place in the programme.85

The problem is this programmes have a voyeurist side. In fact, the audience think of observing secretly the privacy of actors.

On the hand of actors, the life in this television programmes can be fruitful. 120

In fact the life in community, under spotlights allow an other vision of life and so change the habits and open the mind.

But this type of life has an exhibitionnist side.152

Moreover, we can wonder if this programmes who are called "reality tv" are "real".In fact, it's true that this programmes don't reflect the reality.

So there is a danger, for spectators and actors. They can take example on reality-fiction tv and repeat this way of life in their life, in the real world.209

SO in conclusion, it's very difficult to find positive points about reality tv. Immediatley, we can see every dangers and every problems we have.

However, many people watch this programme, are they lucid about the risks?

[yveslouis]

Bonjour,

Je viens de finir mon devoir, pouvez-vous y jeter un coup d'oeil et corriger les fautes?

Merci de votre aide!

Reality TV: for or against?

At the first First(ly), reality tv has been realised to carried out with an artistic aim, in the world of shows.

Today, reality Tv is very popular, (pourquoi ne pas commencer une nouvelle phrase ici ?) many people like this it.

In fact, this type of televison programmes don't ask need a huge capacity of reflection...41

People can sit in front of the televison set after a difficult journey (work)day, They want to rest and hanven't don't have the need to think (le "besoin de réfléchir" ?).

Besides, people have fun in front of/watching the escapades of actors, as if they would be were able to take their place/ could replace them in the programme.

The problem trouble is this these programmes have a voyeuristic side. In fact, the audience think of they are observing secretly the privacy of actors.

On the hand of actors, the life in this these television programmes can be fruitful. 120

In fact the life in community, under spotlights allow an other another vision of life and so changes the habits and opens the mind.

But this type of life has an exhibitionnist side.152

Moreover, we can wonder if this these programmes who which are called "reality tv" are "real". In fact, it's true that this these programmes don't reflect the reality.

So there is a danger, for spectators and actors. They can take example on reality-fiction tv and repeat this way of life in their life (own) lives, in the real world.209

So, in conclusion, it's very difficult to find positive points about reality tv. Immediatley, we can see every dangers and every problems we have. ("every" est singulier)

However, many people (do)* watch this these programmes, (pourquoi ne pas commencer une nouvelle phrase ici ?)are they lucid about the risks?

* l'auxiliaire à la forme affirlmative est une forme d'insistance.

[Djeust]

Bonjour,

Merci de votre aide!

don't have the need to think (le "besoin de réfléchir" ?).

[yveslouis]

Bonjour,

Merci de votre aide!

je voulais mettre "n'ont pas besoin de réfléchir" devant une émission d'un niveau intellectuel et culturel très bas...

How about "They want to rest and they don't have to think."

Ou, mieux : "They want to rest and don't feel like having to think." (...et n'ont pas envie de penser.)

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