Illegal Downloading

[lizza]

Bonjour, j'ai besoin d'une petite correction et de quelques idées à rajouter car mon commentaire n'est pas assez long mais je sèche, un grand merci:

This document is an extract from CBC news published on saturday 24 november 2007. The title is: France cracks on illegal downloading.

So, this headline is very suggestive, this document deals with illegal downloading and french new reform about it.

This change about downloading is established by President Nicolas Sarkosy. It's a decision that concerns illegally downloading movies and music. It isn't concern large-scale piracy but casual- piracy. Indeed, President Nocalas Sarkosy talks about personn who download to their pleasure.

This reform is very important for the french government because it permits to fight against a lawless zone. Indeed, internet isn't enought regulate because this new technologie is recently and a lot of people can have a internet access, today, thanks to price of internet providers.

It isn't very expensive and this access permits to have the phone and a lot of channels.

Government suggests sanction about illegal downloading:

A warning threatening to cut off or suspend internet access if people don't stop illegal file sharing.

I think that people who download hugely risk even a fine.

The government cracks down an illegal downloading but it expects from film producers and music companies an effort to protect CD and DVD. It's a real war that starts.

Je dois répondre également à des questions, il y en a une qui me pose problème : Are people allowed anything to fight against piracy? traduction: qu'est ce que les gens peuvent faire pour lutter contre la piraterie? est-ce bien ça?

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

This document is an extract from CBC news published on Saturday November 24, 2007. The title is: France cracks on illegal downloading.

So, this headline is very suggestive, this document deals with illegal downloading and <french> France's new reform about it.

This change about downloading is established by President Nicolas Sarkozy. It's a decision that concerns illegally downloaded movies and music. It <isn't> doesn't concern large-scale piracy but casual- piracy. Indeed, President Nicolas Sarkozy talks about <personn> people who download <to> for their pleasure.

This reform is very important for the French government because it permits to fight against a lawless zone. Indeed, the Internet isn't <enought regulate> controlled enough because this new technology is recent<ly> and a lot of people can have an Internet access today thanks to <price> the rates of Internet providers.

It isn't very expensive and this access permits to have the phone and a lot of channels.

The government suggests sanctions about illegal downloading:

A warning threatening to cut off or suspend the Internet access if people don't stop illegal file sharing.

I think that people who download hugely risk even a fine.

The government cracks down <an> illegal downloading but it expects an effeort from film producers and music companies <an effort> to protect CDs and DVDs. It's a real war that starts.

Je dois répondre également à des questions, il y en a une qui me pose problème : Are people allowed anything to fight against piracy? traduction: qu'est ce que les gens peuvent faire pour lutter contre la piraterie? est-ce bien ça? Non. C'est : Les gens sont-ils autorisés à quoi que ce soit pour lutter contre le piratage ?

* - Ne pas séparer le COD de son verbe.

- Il est tout de même étonnant que tu ne connaisses pas l'orthographe exacte du nom de notre Président...

- Par ailleurs, il est question ici de "piratage" et non de "piraterie", Dieu merci !

[lizza]

merci pour la correction par contre je ne comprends pas la différence entre : price et rate

Par exemple pour répondre à la questions sur les raisons du piratage: j'ai utilisé price ?

There are a lot of reason of piracy, for exemple:the price of CD or DVD, it's very expensive

the price of cinema

a access internet always speeder permitting a download easier

to feel like see a new film or listen a new music no matter when

to see a new film that don't release to DVD

Voici les réponses à mes questions: pouvez vous me les corriger ? Merci

What is the future of the freedom of speech on the internet?

I think that freedom of speech on the internet will keep because we can't control all network. It's very big. But it's true that a control is very important. I agree with it because sites are very dangerous like suicides sites collectives or nazis sites.There is a limit about freedom of speech on the internet.

However, even if there is a control, internet will remain a good medium of communication thanks to : blog, forum, msn...

What is the future of traditional media?:

I think that a traditional media will exist always. It's very different to read a newspaper and to consult articles in the internet.

To have in hand a newspaper permit to read and read again articles or keep as a souvenir.What is more traditional media will remain essential, for example, radio is an important media in a car. We don't use the internet in this situation.

But it's true that the internet is very practical because it permits to receive information more quickly.

Are people allowed anything to fight against paracy?

Yes, it's not provide to fight against piracy but it's a fight that has to be peaceful. That's to say, we have to do , for example, prevention. Warn to people who download about sanction.

J'ai encore une question ( bete) car je ne la trouve pas dans mon livre de grammaire: l'utilisation de isn't et don't . Merci encore

[Jean B]

merci pour la correction par contre je ne comprends pas la différence entre : price et rate

Par exemple pour répondre à la questions sur les raisons du piratage: j'ai utilisé price ?

=> price = le prix d'un article <--> rate = le tarif

There are a lot of reasons <of > for piracy, for example:the price of CDs or DVDs <it'> is very expensive, so is the price of cinema tickets. <Pas de double sujet en anglais.

An ever faster Internet access <internet always speeder permitting> that enables <a> easier downloads <easier>.<L'adjectif AVANT le nom !.

<to> If people feel like seeing a new film or listening to a new music, they can do so no matter when.

<to> They can also see a new film that <don't> hasn't been released to DVD.

<Apprends à composer des phrases complètes au lieu d'employer un style vaguement télégraphique.

Voici les réponses à mes questions: pouvez-vous me les corriger ? Merci.

What is the future of the freedom of speech on the internet?

I think that freedom of speech on the internet will <keep> remain because we can't control all networks. It's very big. But it's true that a control is very important. I agree with it because some sites are very dangerous like collective suicide sites <collectives> or nazis sites.There is a limit about freedom of speech on the internet.

However, even if there is a control, the Internet will remain a good medium of communication thanks to : blog, forum, msn...

<L'adjectif est INVARIABLE.

What is the future of traditional media?:

I think that <a> traditional media will always exist <always>. It's very different to read a newspaper and to consult articles on the Internet.

<To> Having a newspaper in hand <a newspaper> permits us to read and read again articles or keep them as a souvenir. What is more traditional media will remain essential, for example, the radio is an important medium in a car. We don't use the Internet in this situation.

But it's true that the Internet is very practical because it permits us to receive information more quickly.

=> media est le pluriel latin de medium.

Are people allowed anything to fight against piracy?

[Yes, it's not provide]<?? to fight against piracy but it's a fight that has to be peaceful. That's to say, we have to do prevention, for example <prevention>, warn <to> people who download about sanction.

=> Ne pas séparer le COD du verbe. Attention, c'est la deuxième fois.

J'ai encore une question ( bete) car je ne la trouve pas dans mon livre de grammaire: l'utilisation de isn't et don't . Merci encore

=> isn't = is not - don't = do not. Ce sont les formes contractées de la négation.

[lizza]

Merci pour la correction je vais reprendre tout cela