Vérification De Fautes Dans Un E-mail

[CarenHermy]

Hi everyone !

Here is the answer to the file is put with it. As usual, could you just let me know about my mistakes without correcting them ? If JRB come and have a look on my work, I wanted to tell you that our teacher didn't gave us our last work back so I cannot tell you the mark I had. I really don't know why but well, we have to deal with it... !

We are getting prepared for the FCE exam and here is one of the writing part :

Hi Sara,

I’m glad to see your plans are getting concrete. You are more than welcome to come home but I’m currently very busy with my new job, so this would be better if you could come next month so I can have time to get used to this new lifestyle and be available for you two.

If you want to find out what people usually cook at home, I assume you could post a request on a forum : many people would be pleased to answer your questions.

About local restaurants, I know some amazing in Caen but don’t panic, I’ll take care of it when you’ll come to France.

I regret I won’t be able to come for the restaurant’s opening because we have booked a two-week travel on the Internet and when I’ll come back, I’ll be back to work.

I’ll talk to you later.

Mathilde

(149 words)

[Jean B]

Good morning,

Hi Sara,

I’m glad to see your plans are getting concrete. You are more than welcome to come home but I’m currently very busy with my new job, so this would be better if you could come next month so I can have time to get used to this new lifestyle and be available for you two.

If you want to find out what people usually cook at home, I assume you could post a request on a forum : many people would be pleased to answer your questions.

About local restaurants, I know some amazing (0) in Caen but don’t panic, I’ll take care of it when you <’ll> come to France.

I regret I won’t be able to come for the restaurant’s opening because we have booked a two-week travel on the Internet and when I<’ll> come back, I’ll be back to work.

I’ll talk to you later.

No end-of-mail salutation? No signature?

NB (0) = missing word

Please be careful with the use of the future tense in dependent time clauses.

[CarenHermy]

The signature is "Mathilde" but I forgot the end-of-mail salutation. I guess the missing word is "ones", isn't it ?

Writing this, I wasn't sure about how did I have to use future but I tried and ... this was wrong so thanks for correcting my mistakes.

[Jean B]

The signature is "Mathilde" but I forgot the end-of-mail salutation. I guess the missing word is "ones", isn't it ?

Writing this, I wasn't sure about how did I have to use future but I tried and ... this was wrong so thanks for correcting my mistakes.