Devoir D'anglais

[keira]

Bonjour, mon professeur d'anglais nous a donné un devoir ayant comme sujet: Is ambition necessary in life?

J'aimerai savoir si quelqu'un aurait la gentilesse de bien vouloir corriger mes erreurs. Merci beaucoup!

Ambition is the hard desire of glory and success. It's desire something with straight and to reach (y parvenir). I ambition necessary in life ? We will divide the answer into two parts. First of all we will see why ambition is important for the teenagers then why it can be dangerous to be much ambitious.

First of all, ambition can give the hope to the teenagers and often the students to believe in their choice, in their dream and their career prospect. Indeed, ambition give the energy necessary in order to realise our objectives and to think or imagine what will be our future. Ambition contribute to make us work hard in the studies or at work. Thanks to it we can also acquire a big self-confidence. So ambition let us to get a lot of things.

Nevertheless, ambition can sometimes create desillusions when we don't succeed to become what we had liked and have much ambition can also be seen as a negative thing.

Indeed ambition can lead someone to a way which maybe (conviendra pas). But ambition can also lead us to the failure (echec) and have much ambition can be considered as a negative thing. For instance I have already known people who had lot of ambition and I found those people a bit pretentious, because they were much sure to succeed. Moreover ambition isn't always necessary. We can succeed our studies without being ambitious, only the self-confidence is important. Indeed the self-confidence can help us to achieve great things as succeed and exam.

To sum up, ambition can be necessary in life because it can lead us to achieve great things, to be integrate in the society. Nevertheless ambition can also lead us to desillusions when we don't succeed or when we can't realise our objectives. To my mind it is a good thing to be a bit ambitious because it is a good way to prove at people we believe in our dreams. I have objectives but I often doubt because I'm affraid by the fact not to succeed.

[Jean B]

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