Correction De Texte Et De Conjugaison

[celiayaya]

bonjour je voudrais savoir ci il est possible de me corrigé ce texte merci

Hello, my name is Tony Parker and I’m reporters. I’m going interviews Janet Mitchell who is Geoff’s sister, for about what happened at the pub the day she was wounded.

That it was crossed miss Mitchell?

A bomb had explosed and thus now I am handicapped

What is your state of mind since the accident?

I’m very terrified and horrified, now I feels me cowerlly

Is the life was more difficult to live with your handicap?

Yes, because I’m not any more, even physically and mentally, I am going to be obliged to have appeal to the plastic surgery.

Ok. And Is the glance of people on you difficult to support since the accident ?

Yes very

Thank you for had anwers question bye.

[Jean B]

Bonjour et bienvenue sur le forum.

Bonjour,

Je voudrais savoir s'il est possible de me corriger ce texte, merci.

Hello, my name is Tony Parker and I’m a reporter. I’m going to interview Janet Mitchell who is Geoff’s sister <for> about what happened at the pub on the day she was wounded.

- <That it was crossed>?? miss Mitchell?

- A bomb <had> explosed <and thus> so now I am handicapped.

- What <is> has your state of mind been since the accident?

- I’m very terrified and horrified, now I feel<s me> cowardly.

- Is <the> life <was> more difficult to live with your handicap?

- Yes, because I’m not myself any more, even physically and mentally, I am going to be obliged to have <appeal to the> plastic surgery.

- OK. And <Is> has the way people glance at you been difficult to <support> bear since the accident?

- Yes, it has very much.

- Thank you for <had> anwering my questions, bye.