Correction Des Faute En Anglais

[maud75011PARIS]

Bonsoir

pouvez vous me corriger ?svp

My day that I have hated during the holidays it is on Wednesday October 27, because in colony we must make bicycle with the organizer and the teacher, but one Na which not been able of to make because a child east fell sick. Then we had remained beside him by making board games or reading. The following day the organizer left to see the child who was sick, but the child was increasingly sick. The organizer said to us that one could make Rugby in a stage but at the time to leave to go played, the pluis commencère has to fall. We are to return in the center is we had made considering sow 3. But everyone started with raler because all the world had already seen it. All the pupils were punished because have started to shout and with I igoter in all the directions. L punishment was that everyone goes in their room. Me and my buddy of room we left to hide us in the staircase while the others went in their room. Me and my buddy we had was taken by an organizer, one has were punished, the punishment was awaked 1:00 earlier than the others to clean the table and the bathrooms. Before retouner in Paris we made a photograph. As gone back to Paris he summons us rained and that in the colony the sun had returned.

merci de votre aide

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Ce "texte" est trop visiblement le résultat d'un traducteur automatique, qui plus est de très mauvaise qualité.

Il faut arrêter de nous prendre pour des imbéciles justes bons à récrire un tas d'inepties.

Personnellement, je ne corrige que la production véritable de gens sérieux qui travaillent honnêtement.

A bon entendeur...